So called friend

Soo a couple weeks ago I wrote this but I thought it was s**t. Then yesterday a good friend read it and said it was good and I should put it here.

As they become older

I come into their lives

They enjoy me at first

Spend time with me and think there the luckiest person in the world

Then it starts.

I ignore them

Pretend like I never knew them.

At first they ignore it.

Act like nothing happened.

But I make them weak

They worry and cry

And think, “What did I do to deserve this?”

If I’m real good

Then they become friendless

Soon it becomes too much.

They end their lives

I act if I was sad

But I know my job is done.

I then move on to the next victim

What am I?

Everyone knows me.

I have many faces

And many bodies

I have many names

And so much power.

I’m in all of your lives

Ruining them and even ending them

I never get blamed for my crimes

Because I never look like I could do these horrible things

Still don’t understand?

Let me explain

I’m your so-called friend

 

Author's Note

Soooo what do you like?? I feel like its bad but maybe it's not. This is a verison cause the old format bugged me.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this, powerful, like pay back, sneering... deep. I love this part:
"Everyone knows me.
I have many faces
And many bodies
I have many names
And so much power.
I’m in all of your lives"

[Death Girl]

I love it and I can realy relate to this so much its not even funny.

[Stella Robins]

I love it

[Alex Miller<3]

Wow This is truly amazing I don't think this is bad at all and there is nothing you could do to make this any better.

[idk]

Thanks everyone! :)

[absolutefolie]

Wow. This is amazing. You describe something that I didn't think was able to be described at all, and you did it so wonderfully, that I felt drawn in to this 'character'. Nicely done! :D

[Julia]

this is kind of amazing ! wow i loved reading this . and i understand it ...a bit to well ? aaanyways , great write(:

[Veronica]

I like it :)

[Mari-Sweet]

This is a pretty interesting poem. It's like the speaker is the bad girl. Sinister.

[trippy kitty]

This was great. I loved reading it. The format you used to write it in bugged me a little but it isn't bad XP
Great poem.