Puzzle Pieces

Drafted by time into being,

For one reason or another not past, or future....Now
The call received and the order put in,
Chiseled into the timeline, our creation,
Why now, one guess as good as the other,
It was the moment you were most needed,
Without you the world, so incomplete 
So much like a puzzle,
We are all different and don't all go together,
But if just one of us are lost,
We can never be whole,
The message will be lost and never arrive,
Our master piece never showcased,
The magic isn't in just single person,
It is in all single persons gathering,
The blessing of life doesn't lead to a hall with locked doors,
Every knob turns and new paths unveiled,
It's inconceivable the power we wield,
Emanating from deep inside,
Rippling across the land, mountains, and seas.
Engulfing, embracing, and impacting the globe,
The terrific ability of our actions,
To affect one & their response to another,
In regard to the connection, there are no dead ends,
Pain, hurt, pleasure, & love travel in a continuum to all,
The question is what vibe you will send,
Our destiny doesn't lay in solitary,
Our destiny lays in unity,
And the love we share for all living things 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Astro]

I love this write about the interconnectedness we share as individuals to one another and what we choose to convey to one another. I like the division of "master piece" that you use to convey more of an image that is correlative of your puzzle metaphor. A very good piece of art to be true, although for editing purposes, if you would like to clean up this line, "Out destiny lays in unity" "Out" = "Our" ;)

[II_IV_III_I]

Amazing writing.. I love it

[DJ]

I love the message in this! Nice penned, honest and emotionally charged piece my friend. So true, destiny does lay in unity, one for all not all for one. Enjoyed this, thanks for the share.

[Electric Scribe]

Thank you so much =) I was defiantly trying to ensure some people that no matter how small they are, they are a huge impact on the entire world. We are all connected by someone in some way, shape, or form. With that in mind, the little people are probably the most important due to the mysterious impact they could hold for the world.

[Zero_Edge88]

For what we find in the stars, truly they give us in pieces for we are their specks. Relating to each other we connect so cosmically! When the universe sends a gift to us only we know its contents for we are the recipients of it.

This is beautiful, this is raw emotion my friend. Forget the rhyme scheme here, as you wrote this from your heart as your soul whispered it to you your hands just painted this masterpiece majestically! It reminded me of one of my high school pieces in freshmen year. It was called, "The Journey is not the Destination". It speaks volumes and one that is written for us to understand even under laymen's terms. Greatly scripted good Sir! :)

[Electric Scribe]

To be honest, I don't think I ever really use a rhyme scream.... why should I, I write from the heart, isn't that what poetry/art and inspiration is. Bending the realm of reality in order to best express yourself. I would very much love to read that piece, is it on WC? Thank you so much for this beautiful review I am truly stolked you loved it.

[Zero_Edge88]

Yes it is, from the heart and the soul too! Both are ethereal but they indicate a depth of how we could write out our feelings! Indeed it is. Unfortunately, that piece might not see the light on this page since I might put that on my next poetry book. Speaking of which I did release a paperback poetry book! Would you be interested in taking a peek? Perhaps may I interest you into buying a copy for you to share with your special someone? I assure you despite the pricing it's worth the read. I am stoked it is wonderful to have read this piece! Hope you are having a good night :)

[Electric Scribe]

I would love to look at it =) I have no money right now, this week I have a couple job interviews, so hopefully something will turn up there. Totally bummed I worked so hard, to graduate a year and a couple months early, and still cannot find even a mall job with a psych degree. Well let me know when your ready to show the other piece I would love to read it for sure. Also, how did you go about publishing a book? How much did it cost? and How many poems did you put in there before feeling like you were ready to publish? That girl I wrote "Saturday" about/for, her and I are working on making a book where I write poetry (or my version of poetry lol) and she is going to make really cool trippy artwork to accompany each poem I pump out. There my even been an extra element to our book in the future that I came up with on Friday (SO EXCITED), but I would love any info you can spear. And congratulations by the way for sure, it can't be easy getting everything together and publishing a book, so go you for being awesome.

[Zero_Edge88]

I'm just the way I am man :) I'll leave the link to your inbox how's that sound. That way you could to share it to you and your girl. That sucks man, I didn't even finish school and I was a nursing student too. Long story on that for sure but I am doing my best I can to get my feet up again. The publishing wasn't that hard as I was able to accomplish it through online and they were both free of charge too! I felt I wanted to put 50 so I did and there were some that I thought I could have put but that'll have to wait again when I finish the sequel that I'm working on the first story that I published last month! That is amazing how you two have that dynamic together, it's explosive to say it too! :D Well I look forward to your extra element definitely! Since mine is only black and white I've done everything I can to make sure that I made spaces in between the pieces to accommodate with the writing! There are some surprises you'll be seeing once you see the book! It will be worth your while even though those 50 pieces came out to almost 150+ pages it was so worth it! I worked with it for a whole week BUT those pieces were already 4-6 years old lol! The most important part though is to take your time and don't rush it! You'll enjoy yourself when you feel your book published out there! :D