Never did:

He didnt love me.. Never did:

probably wont finish, never did.

begining Veils black, yet sheer, LOVE

day after week..love from u

the road to me, the AM with me

bothered? never did:

dark love n gracious love

xstacy? far beyond ..

not even needed: intimacy

the 1 hast been found, ..never did:

the sheer black veil fell solid

no road for me(too far), n no AM or PM

black stars fell on.. stripped love

yet still speaking thru soid black rock

ruby love coud never prevail

the lion chose not the bird in the Air

proceedeth to the North..

with no winter fur n no boots, she froze n fell..

  far, n still falling.....

oh the black roar that never did: WTF

y were u here?? if u never did:

n then as if it never was,

black heart, brave heart? bears heart'

darkness shall bare ur future submissive Air...

n ur mind will whisper u: 'She Never Did'

when dark black drips from within, darker black strikes ur tomorrow

there was no syllabus, only a sheer black veil

did u know? i didn't. did u ever? Never did:

pride down n aside, damnit.. I Did

     days to months to year to date..

you never did. (Perversed Jock)

--Quote Author Black*

Reviews

[Farrah Grahm]

oh *claps*
I don't know if you meant to do this, but I read this as kind of disconnected like, as if separate voices were all speakin about one a*****e who lies and cheats, and leaves inthe morning when the loving is done "LOVE

day after week..love from u

the road to me, the AM with me

bothered?"
The imagery is there, but I like the emotion, that clearly comes across. That's the strong point of the poem.

Maybe it's just my pickiness, you probably aren't concerned with this, but I'd clean it up a little, there are a few misspellings, and the cybertalk works, so keep that, but just go through and make sure there aren't too many distracting spelling and grammer mistakes.
:)