If I Were to Break a Heart

What I said, I meant. 

Always means never ever forgotten.

I will forever bear the brand

of two hearts bruised. 

Mine included. 

Let me take the blow I give, 

I caused the pain, let me suffer it gladly. 

If I were to break a heart,

pray let it be mine.

Reviews

[kmartell]

brevity is a goddess. the thought-movement and the heart movement has to connect, with a sudden action somewhere near the end. this happens here. very good.

[SyberRose]

Nicely done Elaenor...Enjoyed your words...Rose