The Blue Thief (Working Title)A Story by Elaenor AislingI know the beginning is lame, but read to the end... Elias Ward slipped out into the back alley of the
Orion Coffee House. It was storming, had been all day, and he glowered at the
black evening sky. He lit a cigarette and stepped back under the awning, trying
to stay out of the rain. His shift was over, but he didn’t feel like going home
yet. Not much of a home to return to, just a bare, sullen, apartment with
neighbors who had a tendency to practice scream therapy at odd hours of the
night. He took a slow drag, watching the tendrils of smoke drift from the
cigarette’s embered end into the damp air. Closing his eyes, he settled back
against the steel door, listening to the sound of rain on asphalt. A small noise disrupted the
rhythm of the rain, and he lazily opened his eyes, glancing around the alley.
He saw nothing but the rusting dumpster, overflowing with rubbish, flanked by
stacks of soggy cardboard boxes and black trash bags. He shrugged, and puffed
another stream of smoke, flicking the ash from the end of the Marlboro.
Probably nothing more than a feral cat. Again he heard the same sound, louder
this time. It was a high-pitched whimper, and it did not sound feline. Letting
curiosity conquer boredom, he took a final drag and tossed the cigarette to the
ground, grinding it into the pavement with a turn of his foot. He stepped into
the rain, and walked down the alley, glancing behind the heaps of bags and
boxes. On the far side of the dumpster, he heard the whimpering again. He
stopped abruptly, listening, and recognized human sobbing. Warily, he peered
behind a large stack of boxes. “What the hell?” He asked
aloud. A small figure was huddled
against the wall of the building, weeping piteously. Through the driving rain,
he discerned a woman’s shape, her knees drawn to her chest and thin white arms
cradling her head. Long black hair cloaked her face and back, clinging to her
body in the rain. The remnants of a red club dress were plastered to her wet
skin. “Good God, are you alright?”
he asked, stepping closer. The woman only sobbed louder and shrank away from
him. He slowly bent down next to her, and tentatively placed a hand on her
shoulder. “Hey, it’s ok, I’m not gonna hurt you. I just wanna help you, ok? Are
you hurt?” The woman lifted her head, and he found himself staring into
striking azure eyes, bright with tears. She shook her head. “Can you stand?” he asked. She
made no move to rise, but pursed her lips in an attempt to stifle another sob.
Her shoulder shuddered under his hand. “Can you stand?” he repeated slowly. She
gave a small nod, and he rose, offering his hand. She took it hesitantly, and
he pulled her to her feet, his other hand extended incase she started to fall.
She was unsteady on her feet, and he slipped a hand about her waist to support
her. She leaned heavily against him as he led her to the doorway. “Here, let me
call 911,” he muttered, fishing his phone out from his coat pocket. “No!” she shrieked. Startled,
he nearly dropped his cell. “Look, if you were
assaulted or robbed,” she cut him off, “I wasn’t! Please don’t.
Please,” She begged. Her tone was heartbreaking. “Ok, ok, no police. Is
there someone else? Do you need a doctor?” She shook her head, clinging to him,
her knuckles white. He tried to calm her down, offering what help he could
think of, but she protested so profusely he finally gave up. “Well, look, you
can’t stay here. My apartment is just up the road. Will you at least let me
take you there till the storm stops?” She nodded, and he took off his coat,
hanging it over her slender shoulders. She let him guide her blindly, leaning
against his shoulder, clinging to his arm. The lobby of Elias’ building
was warm and dry, and the woman eased her grip on his arm little when they
entered it. Dim lights flickered overhead, and he breathed in the familiar
scent of cigarette smoke and rubber flooring.
He hoped with all his might no one would see them, as he knew questions
would be raised as to why he was taking a sobbing, bedraggled woman up to his
apartment. Fortunately the lobby was deserted. The building had no elevator, so
he half dragged, half carried her up the two flights of stairs. He quickly
unlocked the door and drew her inside, escorting her to the old grey couch
before striding back to shut the door. There was a trail of dirty shoe-prints
and water leading down the carpeted hall. Cursing under his breath, he turned
back to his mysterious guest. He quickly stepped out of
his shoes and went to get a dry towel. He then eased the overcoat from her
shoulders, throwing it over a chair back. She took the towel and began to dry
herself off, wiping trails of black mascara from her face. “I really don’t know how to
thank you for this,” she said, her voice still shaking with emotion. He
shrugged. “You don’t have to. ” “I don’t even know your
name.” “I don’t know yours,
either,” He gave her a half smile, and the corner of her mouth twitched. “Adrienne,” she whispered,
drying her hands. Her eyes met his expectantly. “Elias Ward.” A thousand questions swam
in his head, but he forced himself not to ask them. Instead, he excused himself
and went to change into dry clothes. It occurred to him that Adrienne would
need dry clothes too, and he began rifling through his closet, trying to find
something for her to wear. Against the back wall of the closet, he found a heap
of Lara’s clothes she’d forgotten when she’d moved out last year. A wave of
guilt swept over him. It had been a bad breakup. Pushing past aside, he grabbed
sweats and a pink t-shirt, and took them to Adrienne. She did not seem to wonder
why he had women’s clothes at hand, as every detail of the place betrayed him
as a bachelor, but he still felt the need to explain. “These were Lara’s, my ex.
She moved to Jersey last year. You can keep them.” She murmured a word of
thanks and it took him a moment to realize he was staring at her. She was
stunning. Even with hair a mess and eyes red from crying, beautiful seemed an
understatement. Her ivory complexion was perfect, as were her limbs and figure.
He shook his head to clear it. “You can change in the
bedroom,” he said, waving his hand towards the door across the room. She
thanked him again and rose, closing the door softly behind her. Elias plopped down on the
couch, sinking into the lumpy grey cushions. His eyes focused on the dark water
stain left by Adrienne’s body. He wasn’t sure what to do about her, or if he
should do anything. He decided she could stay the night if she wanted to, and
he would get her a cab or a bus ticket in the morning. It was in his nature to
be generous, though it was a trait that had got him into predicaments in the
past. Sighing, he tilted his head back, letting his eyelids droop, and the room
descended into dark. A moment later, he heard
the bedroom door open and his lids lifted, the yellow light of the room
flooding his eyes. Rubbing his eyes with a calloused hand he turned to
Adrienne, who stood leaning against the door frame. Lara’s clothes were a size
to big, the pink t-shirt hung loose, though not unflatteringly, and she had
rolled the waistband of the sweats to her hips. The shirt was short, and a
length of skin showed the trace of hip bones. A shiver ran down his spine. “Hey.” “Hi,” she smiled a little.
She walked across the room, steadier on her feet now, and seated herself on the
other end of the couch. “Again, thank you, Elias. I promise I’ll leave soon,
get out of your way.” He shook his head, “You can stay as long as
you need to.” He replied, searching her eyes. They seemed to loose their
troubled quality, and she visibly relaxed. “Why are you doing this?
All you know is my name. I could be a fugitive or something.” “But you’re not, are you,”
he challenged. Her eyes fell. “No, I’m not.” “Then why wouldn’t you let
me call the cops?” “I…” her voice faded away. “Lets
just say that where I’m from, you don’t trust authority.” Her voice was low, as
though she were about to cry. “Well, will you tell me how
you ended up in the alley?” he said gently. She sucked in a deep breath. “To be honest, I don’t
remember. I know that sounds like an excuse, but I truly don’t.” She was lying,
but he couldn’t help but believe her. “It’s alright. I don’t have
to know.” An awkward silence fell between them for several moments. “You
hungry?” She shook her head. “Just tired.” He glanced at his watch.
12:03. “You can sleep in the
bedroom, if you like,” he offered. “But what about you?” “I don’t mind the couch.” “Are you sure?” “Yeah, it’s fine, really.
You need it more than I do.” A nagging thought scolded him for giving up his
bed, he hated sleeping on the couch, and opening his home to strange women he
found in alleyways? What was wrong with him? “Thanks again.” She
murmured, rising. “I’ll leave in the morning.” He watched her walk across the room, admiring the graceful swing
of her hips and a*s. She shut the door behind her, softly, and he looked away, frowning
at the empty room. Sighing, he got up, locked the deadbolt and turned out the
light, plunging the room into secure darkness. He fumbled back to the couch,
pulling off his shirt and casting his jeans aside. He grabbed the heavy blue blanket
from its place on the back of the couch. The rough wool itched, but it was cool
in the apartment, and he was glad for the warmth. The overstuffed pillow was
too firm, and he pounded it with his fist, trying to disperse the cotton
wadding. Finally, he stretched out, lacing his fingers behind his head. He
listened to the traffic in the street below- a siren sounded in the distance,
somewhere near an impatient driver honked. He found the sounds familiar,
comforting. As long as there were cities, they would be there. Eventually, sleep
came and he drifted into unconscious. Elias awoke to a clammy
hand gripping his shoulder. Startled he sat bolt upright, ready to strike his
assailant, panic rising in his chest as a shriek echoed in his dazed mind. “Elias!” Someone whispered.
His vision cleared slightly and he saw the azure eyes, almost seeming to glow
in the dark room. “Christ, Adrienne! What’s
wrong?” “The screaming,” Came the
fearful whisper. “It’s just the neighbors
upstairs. Like to get busy around 3 am. Just try to ignore them.” But Adrienne remained
frozen next to the couch, her eyes wide. Her teeth clamped down on her bottom
lip, as though to keep from crying. Sighing, he rose and took her by the
shoulders. “Look, there’s nothing to worry about. No one’s being hurt, or going
to hurt you. Just go back to sleep. Ok?” He felt as though he were addressing a
child. She made no move to go. The shrieks continued for a few more seconds
before concluding with a single piercing scream. She flinched. “Come on, its over.” He led
her to the bedroom door, an arm around her shaking shoulders. Releasing her, he
leaned against the door frame, the adrenaline giving way to drowsiness. But
Adrienne clung to him, circling her arms around his chest. He moved to gently push her away, but he
found himself returning the embrace, and could not help but run his fingers
through the black hair which cascaded around her shoulders. Eventually, her body
ceased to tremble, and her grip eased. Her arms slid from his back, and he felt
the coolness of her palms against his bare chest. She looked into his face, her
eyes darting between his eyes and his mouth. Taking the hint, he quickly closed
the few inches between their lips. Their gentle kisses intensified quickly,
passion blooming within them both. Hastily, he edged her into the bedroom and
kicked the door shut. Elias awoke late the next
morning, exhausted. He’d never been so tired after love making, but he’d also
never made love to a woman like Adrienne. Blinking sleep from his eyes, he
squinted, trying to make out the numbers on the wall clock across from the bed.
11:32. Wide shafts of light fell across the bed from the window blinds, bathing
them in the morning sun. His gaze rested on Adrienne, still asleep, her chest
rising and falling with long, tranquil breaths. He smiled, sighing. It sounded
cliché, but he felt as though he had known her forever, even though he knew
only her name. He sank back into the pillows beside her, stroking strands of
raven hair from her face. Her eyes flickered open slowly, and she gave him a
small smile. He planted a kiss on her curving lips. “Morning,” he breathed,
drawing back. Yawning, she stretched lithe arms over her head and sat up,
holding the crumpled sheet over her chest. “Is it really morning
already?” “Yes, unfortunately.” “I should go.” Elias felt panic flutter in his chest. “You don’t have
to.” “But I…” “Please don’t.
I want you to stay.” He blurted out. He sounded like a lovesick schoolboy.
Adrienne looked surprised. “Are you sure?”
She asked, raising an eyebrow. “Yes, very.” “I don’t want
to be a bother.” “How could you
ever be a bother?” he murmured, trying to draw her back to him. She unwrapped
his hands from her waist. “Elias, please.
You don’t know…” “I don’t care.”
“No, really,
you…” “I don’t care!”
he insisted. “Stay with me. Please.” His tone was plaintive, pleading. She
sighed, turning to him with sad eyes. “Alright. I’ll
stay,” she relinquished. Relief swept over him. Adrienne moved to the edge of the bed, preparing to rise and
find her clothes, which were strewn about the room, hastily shed the night
before. She bent down to retrieve the pink T-shirt which lay next to the bed,
and her long hair fell away from her back. Elias gasped. Adrienne flinched,
gripping the sheet against her chest. “Good God…What…?”
His question hung in the air, unfinished. He could only gape, speechless, at
the two ghastly scars which ran down her back. Deep gouges started just above
her shoulder blades, narrowing to raised, white, scratches, their grisly trail ending
mid-back. Gingerly, he brushed his fingers over one streak of white flesh. She
tensed. “Who did this
to you?” he questioned, his voice a horrified whisper. “My father.” Adrienne glanced back at him over her shoulder, strands of black
hair falling over the white scars. He brushed them aside, wondering how he had
not felt the scars last night. “Why?” Her eyes glistened. “A punishment
for disobeying him.” Tears spilled onto her face, and she put up her hands to
hide them, sobbing quietly. Gently, he eased her back down to the bed and
gathered her small frame in his arms. She did not return the embrace, but lay
rigid, her whimpers filling the silence of the room. Some hours
later, Elias found himself still cradling Adrienne. Again his eyes sought the
wall clock. 1:58. He had to be at work by 3:00. Arms aching, he carefully eased
her limp body onto the disheveled sheets, trying not to wake her. He stood, but
had to grab the headboard to support himself. A sudden pain shot through his
head, and he turned to the wall, leaning his head into his folded arm. A small
grunt of pain escaped him. It hurt to breathe. He carefully lowered himself
onto the bed, resting his elbows on his knees. The pain faded quickly, but left
him feeling drained. Adrienne stirred behind him, and he felt her move towards
him. She embraced him, resting her chin on his shoulder. “Are you
alright?” “Yeah, just got
a headache all of a sudden, I’ll be fine in a minute.” “You sure? You
look pale.” “I’m just
tired.” Elias felt better in Adrienne’s arms, and rested for a few
breaths, the beat of her heart echoing in his ears. He exhaled loudly. “I gotta go to
work,” he explained, standing. She sat back on the bed, looking dejected. His
feet still felt unsteady, but he headed for the shower anyway. “I’ll be back
later, grab yourself something to eat. And please don’t leave.” His eyes traced
the lines of her kneeling body, soaking in every perfect detail. She blushed. “I won’t. I
promise.” “Good.” Lethargically, Elias went
through his shift. It felt as though a heavy hand had settled over him, slowing
his movements to a crawl. His co-workers urged him to keep pace, but he found
himself lagging, even when putting forth every ounce of energy he could muster.
Mercifully, it was a fairly slow night, and he didn’t have to lock up. The walk from workplace to
apartment felt unbearably long. The two flights of stairs felt like twelve, and
when he finally shuffled into his apartment, he immediately collapsed on the
couch. He closed his eyes, inhaling the familiar smell of cigarette smoke
mingled with coffee. Adrienne appeared in the kitchen doorway, a steaming mug
in her hands. He managed a small smile. “Ah, you’re still here.” “I don’t have anywhere else
to go.” She sighed, striding across the room. Taking the offered mug, he took a
small sip of coffee, feeling the hot liquid flow down his throat. Adrienne
nestled next to him, and he could smell his shampoo on her hair. “Will you tell me what
happened to you someday?” He asked, placing an arm around her shoulders. “Maybe…it’s a long story.” “I’ve got time.” “Someday, then.” She promised, raising her head from his
shoulder. She moved to put her head in his lap, and lay looking up at him, her
azure eyes bright. She reached a slender hand up, caressing his jaw. He
enclosed her hand in his and brought it tenderly to his lips. “You’re beautiful,” he
murmured, placing the mug on the endtable. She smiled in response, sitting up to kiss him. Still keeping
their lips together, she straddled him, her hands cradling his face. He
embraced her, returning her ardent kisses with more gentle ones, for even
though he wanted her, he felt as though his energy was seeping away, to the
point where his hands dropped to his sides, unable to hold her any longer. She
drew back, her eyes flashing. “What’s the
matter?” He heard anger in her voice. “I’m sorry, I’m
just…so weak all of a sudden.” To his surprise Adrienne smiled, a cruel smile. She threw back
her head and laughed, deep and guttural. “Of course.,”
She chortled, “of courssssse.” To Elias’s
horror, the beautiful face before him dissolved, flakes of ivory skin falling like
ash over him the couch and the room, leaving a dark, transparent, figure. He
squeezed his eyes shut, believing it to be a nightmare, but when he opened them
again, he found himself staring into Adrienne’s azure eyes, only they were no
longer Adrienne’s. The dark figure was faceless but for the eyes which burned
into him, as bright as blue flame. The figure rose
from his lap, towering above his paralyzed body its head reaching almost to the
ceiling, wisps of smoke and flame drifted above the floor where feet should
have been. He lay speechless, to scared
to move, his eyes wide. The black, blue-eyed cloud stared back at him,
hovering. From somewhere he summoned the courage to speak. “W-what are
you?” his voice was tiny, weak, barely more than a whisper. A rasping voice
echoed from the phantom. “Sssuccubusss,”
it hissed gleefully, “By taking your life-forccce, I can return to my rightful
form. That isss why you feel ssso weak…” the creature laughed. “What foolsss
you men are…ssseduccced ssso easssily…” she extended an arm towards him, wisps
of black smoke curling up from her out stretched hand. Elias felt his throat
tighten, as though someone were choking him, though the succubus was not
touching him. He gasped, trying to find air, but there was none. The figure’s
hand drew a sign in the air with her pointer finger, and then placed her palm
over his heart. A quick bolt of light went from Elias’ chest to the succubus’
hand, where she clamped it in a tight fist, a thin green light glowed between
the bars of her fingers. The last bit of life slipped from his limbs. With a
final, fiery glance at the lifeless body before her, the demon melted away. Elias’ body lay
empty on the old sofa, eyes frozen open in terror, and blue lips still parted,
gasping for air. Quietly, his soul drifted from it’s shell, bitter at it’s
exile, and vanished into the night. © 2013 Elaenor AislingAuthor's Note
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Added on January 7, 2013 Last Updated on January 7, 2013 Tags: blue, death, soul, fallen angel, short story AuthorElaenor AislingLimerick, Ireland....I wish.AboutI am currently a student. I write mainly poetry, a few short stories here and there. I love to read and write. Favorite authors include, Victor Hugo, J.R.R. Tolkien, Tolstoy, Wilde, Alcott, C.S. Lewis.. more..Writing
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