I Miss You
A Poem by
Final-Karma
This isn't a poem about love lost. It is the tragedy of love gained
It's the beauty in things
That are long lasting sins
A knife for a back
A helping hand
© 2018 Final-Karma
Author's Note
After some time of thinking and new things happening, I am back. Please review and leave your thoughts. As always thank you in advance!
Reviews
This reminds me of a painting with various hues. Though each profoundly different, each tone tell a beautiful tale. Each stanza holds its own duality, and truth. Great read.
Posted 5 Years Ago
Brief but with so much truth. Lovely and haunting.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Brief but with so much truth. Lovely and haunting.
Beautiful and elegant but strong impacting. Loved it
Posted 6 Years Ago
Beautiful and elegant but strong impacting. Loved it
Wonderful poetry, strong and very eloquent. Wonderfully written, well done. ^_^
Posted 6 Years Ago
Wonderful poetry, strong and very eloquent. Wonderfully written, well done. ^_^
The dichotomy of the line and where to place the object and deed along it. What a great thought provoker. It feels supernatural...just sayin'
Posted 6 Years Ago
The dichotomy of the line and where to place the object and deed along it. What a great thought provoker. It feels supernatural...just sayin'
An interesting perspective & certainly one for me to ponder a while... however, as far as gut reaction is concerned, I already like your 'I Miss You'............. Neville
Posted 6 Years Ago
An interesting perspective & certainly one for me to ponder a while... however, as far as gut reaction is concerned, I already like your 'I Miss You'............. Neville
Beautiful poem. short but meaningful and strong. I enjoyed it! thanks for sharing (:
-Angelina
Posted 6 Years Ago
Beautiful poem. short but meaningful and strong. I enjoyed it! thanks for sharing (:
-Angelina
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed
Such powerful contrasts of color, of light and darkness, of pain and pleasure. Love has a way of opening doors to either wondrous ecstasy or all the horrors of a heart cut open. So richly voiced.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Such powerful contrasts of color, of light and darkness, of pain and pleasure. Love has a way of opening doors to either wondrous ecstasy or all the horrors of a heart cut open. So richly voiced.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you so much! Your work is just as amazing.
Interesting poem. Thought-provoking and deep to say the least. Pondering on this one for quite awhile...
Posted 6 Years Ago
Interesting poem. Thought-provoking and deep to say the least. Pondering on this one for quite awhile...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you! I hope you can understand it soon.
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Hello, I am Final-Karma. I dabble in the known and unknown. Please read my work and let your minds be expanded. Feel free to message me, I am always excited to speak to new people from all walks of li..
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