Talent

You are the light of your world.

A star is born in darkness

Every birth is unique,

has its own flaws

The process is violent,

turbulent,

and at any moment it can fail

Yet.....

It continues

In the end,

when all is done,

the star shines brilliantly.

It's sheer size and radiance,

changes reality itself

You are not so different

Through life,

we have destructive events,

losses, and defeats

But

We continue to shine

So I say,

be strong, be fabulous,

be brave, and have faith

Light your galaxy and bring life.

Author's Note

Still part of a series of thoughts and expressions.

Reviews

[Laurierose]

Very realistic and uplifting. To shed such positivity on the delicate labor of entering life and maintaining it is very hopeful. I like motivational pieces such as this. We never know who may needed to read these words, or if they've ever heard them at all. Keep spreading such infectious messages of encouragement. Great read.

[Final-Karma]

Thank you so much! We find ourselves in such a negative world that it is good to bring light to those who desperately reach.

[Julia.Moore]

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[Onlyme]

Wow... wonderfully uplifting, motivational and powerful. Loved this. Masterpiece. You really do have an epic way with words and seeing the world in general. Bravo.

[Lyn Anderson]

Nicely expressed and presented.
Small note -- I believe you meant sheer as opposed to shear ...
:)

[Final-Karma]

Thank you! I did mean that. Corrected. Thank you for another helpful review.

[Lyn Anderson]

np I enjoy the writing

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

The concept and execution is superb... such a meaningful write!

[Donna]

Thank you for sharing this with us! You did a great job! Beautifully written!

[Final-Karma]

Thank you so much for this!

[Fanicia E.]

I love it. How fitting to compare us to the stars we admire when our inner light shines just as bright.

[Final-Karma]

Thank you so much! Our light does shine brightest of all.

[Fanicia E.]

Thank you for the excellent read!

[Abraham Kureshi]

Loved every bit of it. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of writing!

[Final-Karma]

Thank you for reviewing!