My Best Friend

He is the one that understands me

Showing me patience and kindness

He is the one that likes me

To be content always

The authentic me 

Laughing a bit

Simpering

Being

Me

Reviews

[Whiskurz]

If only we all had friends like this.....Beautifully written.....Whisk

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Sweet! I adore the format, it is one I used quite a bit at one time, it is visually appealing. Well done!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for reviewing my poem!

[Dr. Wood ?]

simple but very effective...I liked this as well. True friends are hard to find, but really true friends should be easy to keep

[EileenMarie]

Yes true friends should be easy to keep :)

[Debbie_Philly]

I like this allot... simply beautiful !!! :)

[EileenMarie]

Thank you :)

[Marissa]

i like this and it's form...awesome!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you :)

[Kes]

This is great. :) Wish I had a friend like that.
Great work!
K

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much!!

[Tomi]

I Love this soo much..well done

[EileenMarie]

Thanks for reading!!

[Falling Leaf.]

And now it is perfect! :)

Kindest regards and best of luck,
Savannah

[EileenMarie]

Thank you do much for your advise!! I love it now :)

[Falling Leaf.]

You're very welcome, and any time!

[EileenMarie]

Again thanks :)

[Owlgirl]

Beautiful! Amazing! Are you sure this is your first attempt? Exceptionall!

[Falling Leaf.]

Ah, I love nonnets! Only hiccup I found was your three-syllable line; there were only two. My suggestion is simpering; it's a synonym of smiling. Also, you seem to have forgotten to capitalize "the" in the five-syllable line. Other than that, a lovely nonnet! They are fun, are they not? It takes talent to sum something up in few short lines, especially such a powerful love that you've written about here. Nicely done!

Kindest regards and best of luck,
Savannah