Rain

The window reflects the rain spraying delicately down from above

Effortlessly the water bounces on the pavement

Could this be a metaphor of love?

or nothing but a symbol of life’s hurtful dent

Reviews

[Kes]

I really like this. It's left open for interpretation, and I really like that.
Good work!
K

[Whiskurz]

Beautiful words wrapped inside a beautiful thought......Well penned my friend......Whisk

[Falling Leaf.]

So much sorrow and wisdom in so few words; rain is such an amazing thing to rain about. I love it!
~The Wilted Rose