Beneath my beautiful

My adaptation of the song Beneath your beautiful

A moment of peace feels like eternity knowing my life in is the weeds

Taking care of everything and everyone else's needs

Afraid to let someone in and see the darkness beneath my beautiful

A moment of peace feels like eternity knowing my life in is the weeds

My beautiful smile is alluring to many

The fear of being cast away is greater than the desire for love

A moment of peace feels like eternity knowing my life in is the weeds

Taking care of everything and everyone else's needs

Reviews

[Tom]

All to easy to get wrapped up and taken for granted by others !

A finely penned, unselfish piece of writing !

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! My take of the song "Beneath your Beautiful" I hope some day I do meet someone to love me ... all of me 😊

[Tom]

Yes, it's a beautiful song and doubtless you will ! 😘

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Beneath your beautiful by Labyrinth is such a beautiful song, I love the way you pieced this.

[EileenMarie]

Thank tou! I did it for a contest. I love that song it's so meaningful.

[Ed Hart]

it isn't like you don't know what the problem is...it's kind of like smoking cigarettes; you want to quit, but you can't stop smoking that last one over and over again...life is a b***h, and then you live...yes, 'life in the weeds' is a good way to put it...when our garden gets too many weeds, we don't have a garden any more...you write about it and put it out here for the world to see, and people come along and sympathize or comment (like me)...so my comment is this: you need some weed killer; you need a whole lot of new and very different information...who would ever have thought that beautiful could become a handicap

[EileenMarie]

Thanks for the review. It is a poem I wrote for a contest. The requirement was to interpret a song which I did here. The song is called Beneath your beautiful.

[Ed Hart]

thank you for the mildness of your correction...i give up

[EileenMarie]

I hope "give up" is just a little sarcasm :) I appreciate all reviews!!