Time alone

Intimacy shared between 2 lonely people

Unexpectedly, it all began

Two people longing for comfort

Enjoying time together

Intimate moments shared

Senses awakened

Desire looms

Relaxing

Touching

Kiss

Reviews

[Tom]

Yes indeed, given the right circumstances a natural magnetism can evolve between two people to pleasurable effect!

Short yet alluringly penned !

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I find that I write well in shorter poetry.

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How true is this piece. It is feeling lonely even in a marriage that drives people to adultery. Great job of capturing the longing to be loved. N.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you... Not adultery but rather unable to commit due to life responsibilities. Its nice to not always have to be alone :)

[Antoñyo]

Nicely-captured piece many can relate to, the space-filler in the drawer of time and surface needs.
A moment, however beautiful, of convincing ourselves, "I can make it."

Thanks for the share

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I am trying to make it that is for sure

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Ohh ohh. Passionate, seductive and blazing. Good end.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for you reading and your review :)

[Lydia Shutter]

When a friendship blossoms into a romantic relationship, it is most often a lasting one. Two people finding each other and curing their loneliness...heavy sigh....always a great subject for a poem. lydi**

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I love your writing & I value your opinion :)

[Philip Muls]

Not by design but unexpectedly, that is the way the best things start. Senses awakened, tuned in to each other. Less is more, well done.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! Im grateful I can write my feelings & have others "get" it 😊

[Philip Muls]

I would appreciate your opinion on my story Ether if you have the time. Kind regards Philip

[AaronFreitas]

I can relate to this on many levels. I have been there where I've met someone with the same wants and desires. Yet, haven't met the one to keep by my side :) I like this write :)

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I'm
Glad you liked it!! Someday we'll meet the one we don't want to be without

[A. Amos]

Life depicted in most wonderful manner, simply loved it!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! Short and to the point is my style but I do choose my words to express my feelings perfectly. :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and you sure do:) hope all is great with you.

[Willard Wells]

Very nice time and expressed just as nicely. Well done and we know I like short verse.

[EileenMarie]

I do much better reading and writing shorter poems. This one is a Nonnet. 9 lines, 9 syllables down to 1. Its one of my favorite styles. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Helps me stay motivated to keep writing.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Short but sweet and to the point.
Simply a short little piece about 2 people, simply seeking each others love and comfort.
Very romantic, emotional and beautiful write :)
I enjoyed it

[EileenMarie]

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I will return the favor. :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)