My soul is bleeding

The pain of a depressed soul

Pain is overwhelming at most times

Destruction overshadows all

Chaos encompasses me

Why can't I see the light?

Is it out there somewhere?

Down on my knees

Looking up

I pray

Help

 

 

Reviews

[A. Amos]

I really can feel your pain and glad you took out on your poetry and created such a amazing piece, I assure you many will relate with your work. thanks you

[NeiL ArandA]

I felt the emotions and deep anguish here . Do you know that King David the father of christian poetry. The author of the Book of Psalm . The man after God's own heart also felt this feeling. It was the time when he was running away from King Saul and in fear of his own life . Even his trusted men turned against him when King Saul subjected their family to the sword and burned their homes and villeges . How did David cope such. despair ? He associated himself to a lonely sparrow alone on a rooftop . If Prozac was available then to David . We would not have Psalms to read now . He coped by desperately reaching and crying out to God . I did looked and searched why he's called the man after His own heart ? He does have some unique character . He truly repented when he commited a sin with Batsheba . He praised and thanked God even when everything is falling apart in his life . But here is probably what set him apart from Solomon and earned him that declaration . He said and penned this two beautiful heartfelt words . When his world was caving in on him. He declared to God " I'm Yours ". Meaning I belong to You God . He took his focus off his situation and focus his attention to his God . Psalm119:94. I looked and have pondered this myself for I too wanted and desired to be seeker of His own heart .

[EileenMarie]

I appreciate your thoughts. I was in a place of pain and I am finding my way out! However I do tend to write about all emotions I go through so hopefully I will find a happy one soon.

[NeiL ArandA]

You are welcome. I enjoyed reading your piece.

[TL Boehm]

I can so relate to this. Its how so many days go. This format is actually more difficult than you made it appear. I don't write many poems with form or discipline - because I am very lazy. Well penned

[EileenMarie]

I can't thank you enough.. Very dark few days & I think my writing isn't that good & you made me feel proud of myself.. I write to get the thoughts out :)

[Jack...]

This is very gripping and tense. Fear seems evident in this wonderful piece. Very nicely penned Eileen.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you Jack. I edited for word changes as I am never fully quite satisfied. I appreciate your reviews :)