And it's over without pause

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

Sad

It ends

Without words

Another’s lies

Hurting so many

No conscience does she have

Betraying for no reason

Wreaking havoc for no purpose

Hurting only the innocent ones

Leaving only questions without answers 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I see you kept to the formula well. It isnt my cup of tea Though it does meter the wrds out right.As you know I like the rhyme in my own coupled with the meter

[EileenMarie]

I have a hard time rhyming but I should try harder I suppose! Thanks for the review!

[Marie]

Etheree...another poetic form I didn't know about.
Very interesting...

[EileenMarie]

Thank you !

[iliOZ]

good thing you have two great kids with whom you find your consolation and not writing out of desperation.
good job, loved it

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for the review!

[SyberRose]

I didnt know about this form Eileen...I will have to try it sometime...good job..SyberRose

[EileenMarie]

I like trying new styles of poetry! Thanks for reviewing!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very well done with form...and the content stings.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you........ stings is a very good word to describe this!!

[zainul]

A great truth expressed eloquently through a novel approach.
Enjoyed reading.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you I am glad you liked it!

[zainul]

You are most welcome :)