So we meet again

This is a Tanka

A familiar face

Seen from across the dim room

Smile filled with warmth

Slowly I pass where you are

Eyes meet and you say hello

Reviews

[Eileenws]

You do a good job of conveying this happy reunion. Good job.
P. S. My parents named me Eileen Mary. Mary was my mother's name so I went by Eileen,unless I was in trouble. Always like meeting another Eileen. You did well in the contest. Congrats.

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much Eileen!

[iliOZ]

i've seen you many times, beautiful woman
we may have even lost our breath momentarily at those times
we were never introduced to each other
we were too shy to waive
or smile
but
we
met.
for sure


~OZ

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for the review!

[Helen Crutchett]

Lovely sentiments, well written. Thanks for submitting this to the Tanka contest!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I love having to write for your contests, they inspire me!