My angry daughter

My angry daughter

A Poem by EileenMarie

Volatile is how my daughter was

She was impatient I was late

Screaming as loud as she could

Laced with profanities

Her anger unleashed

On me clearly

Horrible mom

She wanted

Me to

Hurt

© 2013 EileenMarie


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sharing this is a way open gesture-
a teenage girl coming out of a divorce situation with a bustling x in law next door
her anger will relent but only with open mommy arms...she will explode again but it is not over tardiness it seems to me that someone is feeding her with your mommy is off her rocker spoon-but mommy's can melt metal spoons*)so melt away
this is so darn open I LOVE IT
thank you for sharing a piece of your life with us truly

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Thank you....... I am definitely an emotional writer and tend to write about things going on in my l.. read more
:/ I'm sure not a very good feeling for a parent, but you worded this well, and at least you got it all out. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much.. its a rollercoaster ride that is for sure!
One day she'll regret having acted that way. I went through something similar with my middle son when he was in his late teens, but now in his late thirties, he's very loving and respectful. Saying this probably doesn't do much for the pain and anguish you feel now, though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

I have hope she will get through this time and look back realizing I wasn't the enemy!
Thanks for sharing.
Did you ever behave like this to your mom?
If not,why children of current generations do like this?
Are we not taking proper care?
Congratulate you for expressing through a new approach.

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

No I didn't act like that, I didn't particularly like my mom when I was a teenager but I didn't figh.. read more
zainul

11 Years Ago

I am very happy to learn this.
That's how teen age daughters are...they change...

Posted 11 Years Ago


EileenMarie

11 Years Ago

So I am told :).........

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A little about me and my life....... My name is Eileen my middle name is Marie but my dad always called me EileenMarie so.... I am 55 and have 2 great kids. My son is 23 graduated college, living on h.. more..

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