My first born

 You were born to me first day of spring

    A month early you made your appearance

 Little features was all I could see

 You were born to me first day of spring

 Ten fingers, ten toes all made from me

Little tufts of hair and squinting blue eyes

  You were born to me first day of spring

  A month early you made your appearance

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

very sweet poem I liked the repeating line of spring it gave an extra fresh feel.

[EileenMarie]

I was trying a new style a Triolet... I haven't written in awhile.. I need to get back to it!!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

well you did very well

[Helen Crutchett]

So sweet EileenMarie. Reminds me that I wrote a poem about 'my first-born Son'. Must post it one day. (I went on to have two more sons, but the thrill of one's first is precious and never forgotten. Lovely poem.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!

[zainul]

Wish a very Happy Birthday to your son !!!
Repetition of two lines makes the piece wonderful.

[EileenMarie]

Its a Triolet... I am always trying new styles :)

[zainul]

This is quite lovely.
Really enjoy new styles :)

[Marie]

I don't remember what the first day os spring is on the calendar, but this must be a special baby.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you for reading Marie! 1st day of spring varies between March 20 & March 21. My son was born 16 years ago tomorrow :) that year it was the 1st day of Spring