Missing you

You are in my dreams, in my awake

Our last kiss still on my mind

So passionate yet not enough

Needing more in your life

More than I could give

Or so you thought

But you stay

With her

Why?

Reviews

[emmajoy]

How on earth did you manage to use this form yet write such emotional words, don't really know. Need to call in more often, you've real skill and elegance.

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much! I love writing Nonnets and this one just came to me :)

[Muse]

You pen with raw human emotion. Excellent

[EileenMarie]

Thank you I am glad you liked it!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Sometimes it is hard to leason with love....


Lovely flow and uniquely structured poem makes this one stand out for me today...

Well done...

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I love writing Nonnets ... I need to experiment with other types though :)

[keyvan]

It is beautiful....lovely and amazing...thank you

[EileenMarie]

Thanks for reviewing!

[Holly Mason]

very beautiful so open
thank you for sharing

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

this one hits home......perhaps he stays because he loves you both. :) It is possible to love more than one person but it is very hard being the other woman. :(

[EileenMarie]

Thank you...... no he stays because of our age difference and I have everything he still wants on his own.......

[Syraj Syed]

Powerful emotion for such a Spartan work...you fit a so much of yourself into such a small space...the final question is cathartic and, for me, an indictment from my memories...I think you've lent expression to a human condition that is often left unattended...

[EileenMarie]

I love writing Nonnets like this....... thanks so much for reviewing!