The Semi photo

The Semi photo

A Poem by EileenMarie
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I was able to grab this photo of my daughter, she didn't know I was taking the picture.

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I catch her smile with my camera

A beauty showing innocence

Hair swept up loosely with curls

Big hazel eyes twinkle

Natural pink lips

Pale clear soft skin

Wonderment

Fills her

Look

© 2012 EileenMarie


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how sweer. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A Nonnet! My god you like a challenge. The picture that goes with this is remarkable. Almost a candid shot, they are the BEST especially for your own kids.

This is a very good example of just how good a Nonnet can be. Very descriptive. A clean concise write. Loved it.

100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

I love Nonnets, they come easy to me for some reason. Thanks again for the reviews I really appreci.. read more
Your Nonnets are always Beautiful! well done!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review!
Beautiful and loving poem for a beautiful girl. No more to add.

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Thank you..... my daughter is a joy to me this picture of her I love!
What a wonderful picture of her! You have described her beautifully and that look on her face and in her eyes.

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm trying to use more descriptive words :)
Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Our children can be great inspiration! Loved this. :)
Beautiful. I feel I could almost recognize your daughter if I met her.

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

That is her in the photo :) thank you for your review!
Wonderful job

From a fellow Photographer

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Thank you :) I take that highly :) I have trouble getting my kids to let me take their pictures so.. read more
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

:)
Lovely write... interesting form used.

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Thank you :) it's a Nonnet start with 9 lines 9 syllables down to 1.
Very lovely. :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

I hope you saw the correct photo lol I was having trouble getting the right one on! Thanks for the .. read more

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