My senses coming alive

My senses coming alive

A Poem by EileenMarie

Heavy grey clouds fill the sky outside from where I am.

The wind blows effortless shaking the weakest leaves into the open space

Fall has arrived faster than I was prepared for

I sit staring blankly out the window, 

knowing I need to finish what I am doing

Looking outside and longing to be with nature is where I would rather be.

Hearing the sounds of the city day hard at work,

Smelling the faint scents of a city that is alive,

Touching the air as it strongly blows my hair in many directions

Seeing the hustle and bustle of the people places and things, all in motion

Tasting the city as I breathe each breath while I walk along,

Ahh……………Boston is beautiful any time of year especially when you're outside.

© 2012 EileenMarie


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I would love to see Boston at this time...as you describe it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Yes Boston is Beautiful it really is :) all the seasons have something I love..
Thanks as alw.. read more
Relatable, for me. I adore each and every season. Well done. One thing: second to last line, your should be you're. Nevertheless a simple and lovely poem. Felt good to read it, haven't seen anything posted by you in a while.

Keep doing what you're doing,
Savannah

Posted 12 Years Ago


EileenMarie

12 Years Ago

Thanks and I fixed the grammar error, nice catch! I've been writing but I want to experiment with d.. read more
Falling Leaf.

12 Years Ago

I love trying different styles! Someday you just might stumble across your favorite :)

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A little about me and my life....... My name is Eileen my middle name is Marie but my dad always called me EileenMarie so.... I am 55 and have 2 great kids. My son is 23 graduated college, living on h.. more..

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