Good vs Evil

Using the guide lines of Helena's Blue Rose Cafe, I wrote this.....not sure I like it but I am going to keep it and see if I can tweet it if necessary

PERFUME lingered from her 

SPLENDID form.  Her lasting

PRESENCE was felt. She in

OBLIVION.  No  

PURER than polluted water.  

GLASS is half full? No! I look to the  

SKY.

SERENE thoughts surround me.

TWO clouds reminding me, God is  

MERCIFUL

Reviews

[Marie]

This is lovely. I entered the contest too, thugh did not post my work on the site. I did a story, not a poem. I couldn't do a poem this well.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you! I wish I could write a story but right now I find I don't have the patience.. I need to find some quiet time to review stories here!!

[Tomi]

:D Beautiful! well done

[EileenMarie]

Thanks so much!

[Helen Crutchett]

Very nice indeed. You've done a great job with the Ten. Thanks for submitting this to the contest!

[EileenMarie]

Thank you!!