Melancholy
A Poem by
EileenMarie
Acrostic
Melancholy
Mood
Enervating
Lulls
And
Nearly
Causing
Hell
On
Lonely
Youth
© 2012 EileenMarie
Author's Note
My first attempt at Acrostic :)
Constructive Criticism please...... Thanks :)
Reviews
A very good attempt.... great job.... and it was felt as well !! ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
A successful first attempt...if enervating was enervates, this could have been a hybrid acrostic/senryu and you would have claimed a hybrid form ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
A successful first attempt...if enervating was enervates, this could have been a hybrid acrostic/senryu and you would have claimed a hybrid form ;)
12 Years Ago
Ummm ok ;) I'll have to check that out! Thanks for the review!
A very good acrostic for your first time......Well penned my friend......Whisk
Posted 12 Years Ago
A very good acrostic for your first time......Well penned my friend......Whisk
12 Years Ago
Wow that was fast! Thanks so much for your reviews :)
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Added on July 12, 2012
Last Updated on July 15, 2012
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EileenMarie MA
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A little about me and my life....... My name is Eileen my middle name is Marie but my dad always called me EileenMarie so.... I am 55 and have 2 great kids. My son is 23 graduated college, living on h..
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