Child of the Earth

Child of the Earth

A Poem by Elin

She strolled through her realm,
unaware of the follower.
It all seemed so natural to her,
stepping over stones and branches.
Even though it were her first time.
A new born Child of the Earth.

© 2012 Elin


Author's Note

Elin
Norwegian is my first language, so my english isnt the best. Grammar errors can occur.

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Hei!
This speaks to me as a beautiful metaphor, like the birth of a new born fawn or a human child in the world, facing obstacles and turns at every other corner and over coming them so as to continue living a beautiful life. Short, simple, sweet, portrayed a lot of emotion and expressiveness and makes the reader think. All in all that's the work of an artist and sums up a great write. xoxo - Kee.


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hei!
This speaks to me as a beautiful metaphor, like the birth of a new born fawn or a human child in the world, facing obstacles and turns at every other corner and over coming them so as to continue living a beautiful life. Short, simple, sweet, portrayed a lot of emotion and expressiveness and makes the reader think. All in all that's the work of an artist and sums up a great write. xoxo - Kee.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Being twice born is a blessing indeed..

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Added on December 28, 2012
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Elin
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