Purblind

An empty body in an empty room.

Walls over sky

Drugs over dozen

Numb,  just numb , empty body in an empty room.....

Dark, the room is dark.

Just like the darkness of the girl life.

Chained to the bed ,

Lying naked , empty , empty soul !

No light_  just silence ,

No hope_  just misery ,

No love_  nolove in the room ,

Cuz' it's an empty room,

Just like the emptyness of the girls heart!

No image of stars ,

No memory of the sun,

Just pitch-dark night without the moon.

Empty , an empty sky ,

Just like the emptyness of her eyes!!!

Reviews

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Good writing, emotional maybe? Also sounded somewhat similar as a complaint, just my opinion, nevertheless, still a good poem. Great writing, keep up the good work.