Uncertainty

Feelings that I tried to put in words

I had the chance

I screwed it up

Made no advance

Been sold a pup

By inner lag

Of confidence

To simply check

If my plush plans

To conquer you

Romantically

Could become true

I can't foresee

Do you like me
Will it be love

A state-to-be

Or do I bluff

Myself when I

Pretend that you

Deem me the guy

For honeymoon

Just possibly

Just as a thought

My only plea

I only sought

You letting me

Know what you think

If you agree

There is this link

Between us two

Please see it too

I'd like to woo

Just one, just you

I fall asleep

And in my dreams

My deep thoughts keep

As it then seems

You vivid at

A sparkling space

It's in my head

Where I embrace

Not only you

On top of this

But two by two

Togetherness

When you appear

On my life's stage

And when you sphere

Me, you engage

A humble youth

With all your traits

Stunned so in sooth

I ask the Fates

To stand by me

When I'm with you

Audacity

To say what's true

You make the play

A comedy
You make my day

A time of glee

Words failed me though

What is the key

My greatest foe

Hesitancy

My fear was real

I did not dare

Dwell on appeal

The spell was there

What am I lost

In universe

What does it cost

To flee my curse

I just wish luck

I just wish pluck

A mix of both

And finally
Your lover's oath

Author's Note

I'm not a native speaker, so please let me know which parts are just bad English!

Reviews

[Owen Aldin]

I quite like the style of this, it is very punchy and snappy!