I am Searching

I am lost

I am constantly stumbling in problem,

I haven't discovered self,

with each passing day,

Feeling like I'm breaking, piece by piece,

and the pieces are lost, scattered far and wide

I know my cause, I see the path

Yet here I stand, confused, adrift,

searching within self, what define

me, it's just so confusing,

all I find is a chaotic drift.

My mind, it halts uncertain, still,
As I unravel, losing will,
Becoming something, I can't see

Author's Note

Wonder.....................................

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

like the other poem of yours i reviewed, this brings to mind my own personal struggles. the brute sinceirty of your words is effective. but i see a strong person behind this poem. there's vitality in these words, words like "breaking," "chaotic" "halt" are harsh images. harsh conditions build muscles. so i say again, i hope you continue writing and explore all the dimensions of who you are. i'll be sure to review these works too.

[camac1994]

Yes! The chaotic drift. And the halt. I see him struggling against the very thing trying to disrupt his path in life.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

struggle was the word i was looking for! yes, but to sturggle means you are a fighter. and if you can take on fight, you can do it again.

[camac1994]

Yes! Oh yes! He is a fighter! I thought he was weak but he is strong! I thought he needed my friendship but he does not need anything. He is most definitely a fighter!

[camac1994]

Ego of Stone I love your humble spirit, your sincerity.
You write beaufifully

[camac1994]

In a daze, not even really me,
I begin each day leaving pieces of me to the former days.
Some say, 'You must grow. You must mature'.................
I want LIFE NOW.

[Ego of Stone]

Thank you, for beautiful and on, and review

[camac1994]

You are my friend.
I care about you.

[camac1994]

The Circle of Life; we all must have growing pangs.

[Ego of Stone]

Yep, you learn you become, you change