Reflection of Abyss

He died between Abyss and Space,

In search of Heaven,

reincarnated in different dimension

in realms where time has no face

Another identity,

Lost, out of touch with reality

confused, yet still in search of what he craved

How will it feel?

When you look into the mirror,

and see yourself becoming what you fear

You hate, How will you feel?

When the reflection is Death itself

staring at you, but your senses are numb

trapped in endless pursue of wanting more

And more, The hunger never ends

Even after death, memories intact

you will be blinded by your mortal thoughts

Unless you walk on the path of contentment

Learning and understanding self.......................

Author's Note

How will if Feel? How will you Feel?
I Guess we will never Know.............

Reviews

[Lobos]

Being the one you hate most seems inevitable; no matter how many times you try, it's a fight you can't win.

[Ego of Stone]

I Think it's a winnable Fight but, It's the very hard path to walk on like monks, It's the last phase to life after we finish our duty, we walk the path of enlightment like lord buddha only focusing on truth of existence, but it will be the last battle for everyone because we are unable to control our emotion,

[ronnieperrie]

Jesus knows we are not perfect. That's why he gave his life as Sacrifice so we can simply say "Forgive me" and we are cleansed from ALL Sins!

[ronnieperrie]

Hi Ego, This reminds me of Jesus' death.
He shed his blood as Sacrifice so we will never die permanently.
We only must believe.
His perfect blood covers our sins.
Sin cannot attain eternal life.
Thanks for sharing

[Ego of Stone]

Welcome,
and thank You for the review ronnieperrie
it's so fascinating how you interpreted it completely different from me, when I was writing, Lots of love, and thanks for reading ......

[ronnieperrie]

Yes, fascinating. As you say, "The hunger never ends".
I am curious for your knowledge and will gladly share mine. Only if you ask. My friend.

[Ego of Stone]

Yes would love to get you input

[ronnieperrie]

In your Author's Note you ask, "How will if Feel? How will you Feel?
I Guess we will never Know............." Just accept Jesus' Death on the Cross as Sacrifice for our sins. We will spend Eternity with our Creator