Ghosts

Ghosts

A Poem by Effy
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Rhyming thoughts.

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You say you want love

But you’re not even trying

Clinging on to the past

You’re too scared of dying.

But as time goes on

And you reminisce

You’ll learn to regret

The one that you missed.

© 2011 Effy


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deep thoughts in few words. nice job

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think it is beautiful...you know in that sad but totally awesome way :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Gets right to the point...strong feelings here...

Posted 12 Years Ago


mmmhhmmm.... regret is that little something that nobody can destroy only silence for awhile...
very nice read!! can relate to it in so many different ways.. keep it up!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


good job, i think that if you threw away a few commas here and here you would have a much easier and better flow but i do like it the way it is!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 30, 2011
Last Updated on December 1, 2011
Tags: Love, Poetry, memories, regret

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Effy
Effy

United Kingdom



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Hey, I'm just an average 18 year old English student looking for a bit of inspiration! Writing is my passion and has always been my way of expressing myself.. My other loves are music and the rain. .. more..

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