A Development for Distaste

Written on 1:01 PM 8/1/2011. 8 being August. A day "rich" with pressure, scorn, disrespect, Insults, foreboding insomnia, dehydration, headache and a bleak sleepwalk to the PC later..

It takes a while

Yeah it takes a while

It starts off innocent

Unwitting and subservient

By the time you come to it

You are already going through it

Waist deep its sinking in

Head first distressed

Wana destroy them all

I wana make them all pay

I never thought it would come down to this

My tongue now stinging in this rancid

Development

for distaste

It takes a special conscience

Extraordinary amounts of

Invincible patience in the meantime

Just don''t underestimate my ignorance

It takes a while

Yeah it takes a while

It starts off innocuous

Unwitting and subservient

Yeah u need time on your side

Revive a forgotten style

Hard falls are never learnt

Evil is just a virus on the world

Its just a matter of time

For everything you knew sane

Leave the edge of comprehension

Its just a matter of time

For everything you knew sound

Come crumbling down

By the time you come to it

You are already going through it

Waist deep its sinking in

Head first distressed

Wana destroy them all

I wana make them all pay

I never thought it would come to this

My tongue is stinging in this rancid

Development

for distaste

It takes a while

Yeah it takes a while

It starts off with innocence

Inviting and subservient

Author's Note

review me? really? if you decide to, please don't cockblock

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'A Development for Distaste'
Effector Prime,
You revealed a rant of true expression.
Life has many of these times when we are raw
and just open to what is going on.
Cool stuff and understandable;
Waist deep it's sinking in
Head first distressed'
'By the time you come to it
you are already going through it'
Writing is like a moment by moment journal, a history
of where wev'e been, what wev'e experienced.
'It takes a while
yea it takes a while
I starts off with innocence
Inviting subservient.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Effector Prime]

Blessed Ineffable

[Arrinae]

I like the message you are trying to tell us in this piece, but you need to look over your spelling, grammar, and punctuation just a bit for there are many typos and errors that jump out far to easily. Thatnk you for sharing it with us though.

[Effector Prime]

You are thuh mostest of dem welcomed me Lady.
Sorry : )