In the end

Like light that flowers

In the darkness of space travel

In a void of boundless measure

Into a soft bright corner

I spoke countless things

That invoked only your endless anger

You let mine subside

You swallowed it all

Let me swallow yours

Please let me, I cherish yours

Mine was unfathomed

Lonely I was only hungry for your

safety but not demeaning I swear

You weighed me down too with my secrets

I tend to not remember

It hurt

And it was a beautiful hurt

You bloom in your corner my angry goddess

my petaly angel my flower my sprite

In me sprout yellow daggers and they draw my blood

I feel them

And I will for all eternity please forgive me

I know why you think I'm alternating

Forever changing

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I feel the depth of pain and sadness of your plea for understanding and forgiveness in this poem. Eloquent, honest, passionate words to a lover...beautiful flow, cadence and tender,ethereal imagery- "my petaly angel.." I am won over- I hope she was as well! Excellent poem.

[Effector Prime]

She's a mystic beauty

[Carol Cashes]

"You weighed me down too with my secrets
I tend to not remember"

Best lines. Old women say share your burdens to lighten them, but too many times shared secrets become even more burdensome to the teller, not the keeper.

[AYVID N]

An apology so heartfelt ...I feel the sincerity and depth in each line. Great, powerful expressions Effector. This will bring her back. 👍

[Effector Prime]

Naa lol it was "the end" wernt it