I don't like this

When you know things are coming down already even as you phrase the next thing to say.

Fools gold

I like it when you ask me to turn the volume up

I like it when you ask me if I like it

I like it when you ask me when I smile

What's up

Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah

Between sunset and sunrise

Then slept, four chambers

Some of them squeezed shut

To accommodate your splendor

You never miss anything.. :D

For I dread it happening

Well, for you never miss anything

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked this poem a lot.
"Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah
Between sunset and sunrise
Then slept, four chambers
Some of them squeezed shut
To accommodate your splendor
You never miss anything"
The above lines. Solid and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Effector Prime]

To read such words from the Coyote himself... I am still digesting and processing the nutrition from your reflection... To hear such words from the Coyote himself... I'm not afraid to die now, I will lay to rest peacefully...

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem my friend and better to dodge death. Death comes when death wants.

[Effector Prime]

Aye indeed. For that reason I will hold still, I will live.

[AYVID N]

For I dread it happening
Well, for you never miss anything

We get so besotted with some people we give them all our controls. Then we dread it happening but it happens anyway. A very deep and thoughtful write.

[Effector Prime]

Totally. In this I have depicted of the one thing that truly freaks me out about a girl-friend: doing something she wouldn't appreciate lol and realizing she's unhappy. Oh hey that's the title! Haha... Sophie and I hooked up in Glasgow a few days before I had written this lol and I had written this to tease her after hooking her up likewise with wc.

Appreciate your review immensely, dear Divya xxX

[Namrata]

So this poem is written about sophie?

[Effector Prime]

bsolutely nott makes you think that

[Namrata]

Her picture maybe.

[Namrata]

Her picture maybe.

[Effector Prime]

It was fr her by all means