smitten on cue

smitten on cue

A Poem by Effector Prime
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the umpteenth commemoration

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bursting with light
profusing with words nigh
lost focus dim awareness
spare thee
at the end of my sight

incessant delay soggy mire
yet the mind caught fire
sought omens did my solitude
I couldn't see
beyond my plight

a light emanating confusion
I could swear it was not your complexion
then again when I got to know you
everything was bright about you

everything that transpired
bereft and blurry come expiry
sought omens did my solitude
I couldn't see
beyond my plight

a light emanating confusion
I could swear it was not your complexion
then again when I got to know you
everything was bright about you
smitten on cue

bursting with light
profusing with words nigh
lost focus dim awareness
spare thee
at the end of my sight

smitten on cue
I was smtten on cue
I hope it would never happen again
because there'll never be another you

the feeling is reserved for you
it's gone and no one can be you
you're here forever
because there'll never be another you

a light emanating confusion
I could swear it was not your complexion
then again when I got to know you
everything was bright about you
smitten on cue

© 2014 Effector Prime


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A light emanating confusion
I could swear it was not your complexion.
That's a pair of intriguing lines.
Given that I would know your state of mind...it's easy to comprehend the poem but a stranger would find it reserved to the core of your heart.
To write but not to express. That's the vibe I get , reading this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Effector Prime

10 Years Ago

It's not uncommon for someone with a highly evolved, extremely omniscient cognitive complex to specu.. read more



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A light emanating confusion
I could swear it was not your complexion.
That's a pair of intriguing lines.
Given that I would know your state of mind...it's easy to comprehend the poem but a stranger would find it reserved to the core of your heart.
To write but not to express. That's the vibe I get , reading this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Effector Prime

10 Years Ago

It's not uncommon for someone with a highly evolved, extremely omniscient cognitive complex to specu.. read more

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Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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