amorous

I became who I am because of you.. Thank you

It sure must've been a day of day of days

My eyes were going through uncommon rapture

I learned decades and days and dates later

you were a fuel to everything that transpired

you had an otherworldly mellow blur

I can't say I saw you all that clear

what I went through in a moment just settled

I had decided upon the very definition

vivid was my memory

lucid was my perspective

clear were my decision

to fall in love with you

It sure was instantaneous

I had a feeling at that moment or maybe I didn't

My mind was changing electrons

atoms configuration no longer hidden

It was something I couldn't quite put my finger

but I couldn't dis because this was sure different

what I went through in a moment just settled

I had decided upon the very definition

vivid was my memory

lucid was my perspective

clear were my decision

to fall in love with you

It sure was a day of days

I reflected upon it even today just now

how could it have died without meaning

just an experience for all that was wrough

vivid is my memory

I still look up to my outlook

but unclear decisions was I blinded by your light

why did you deceive me oh goddess who just took

Author's Note

fast paced heavy metal

Reviews

[Namrata]

love at first sight or is it just lust that you say?

[Effector Prime]

interesting question.. At 19 it felt like an intensely-charged love.. and it was. It lasted for a decade.. At 34, it feels like lust now.. But I loved her, by jove, I did! Every god particle in me was screaming her name for 10 years.. I loved her, from the moment she first entered my optic nerves, till the day she died.

[Namrata]

I am sorry about your muse. She is very much alive, her beauty is, in your verse.

[Effector Prime]

gracious :)