Floor

When things go wrong, they stay wrong.. what's the point of recovery, breakthrough.. and..what's the point of gedn filthy rich when that 1 thing you love and desire is never within reach? or isn't it?

wham!

speed

I know I'll be dead

if I'm not unscathed

with every bearing second

life loses lustre

displacement

time is still

glass flies, through me

I can only see her beconing

last stretch she said

never coming back

I'll marry someone else she said

I'm never looking back

you wont be dead

nay unscathed

I'll shift gears on us

seven years

I persevered

Now she's.. ah forget it

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Effector, this poem made me smile. I was all ready for the crunch after the amazing crescendo ... when 'ah forget it'. Sometimes, it is better to forget things rather than try to work out the sense of them. Well penned.

[Effector Prime]

indeed :) sigh.. indeed my friend.. I've spent a lot of life on her..vain; but no my songs deserve better.. thank you from the bottom of my being :)