Suremitha

a song for my crazy prodigious edit: Cuntinng cousin. a real pisser

"She's only a little girl

got so much to learn

she's gota open her eyes"

This is a song about Suremitha

The greatest chick in my homy backyard

I've known her for ages

Since she reincarnated

She flew well with the flock

but was so different

I loved how she screamed when she was younger

the steadfast impatience oh the powerful anger

but it was always so funny to see

how she cowered and crooned at her father BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

how sweet

now she just laughs when she gets frustrated

or does she?

there are times when I get through to her

sometimes I don't

Then I realise

she ain't dumb but ignorant

because she's only a little girl

I try to open her eyes

if there's one thing she hates

it's people who dis

but she is the 'un

never fails to get me amiss

every one of our discussions

sure end in regret

we never 'earn any lessons

yet soon to forget

Sometimes she annoys

so much that she disappoints

Then I realise

she's only a little girl

Got so much to learn

She's got to open her eyes

I still adore how her giggles end in a croak

it's something she'll never lose, something she grows with

like a cackling granny with a sore throat HAHAHAHAHA!

We used to get crazy

before she got busy

I miss the days and times

before her gcse

Reviews

[Namrata]

love to suremitha..crazily cute. you make onomatopoeic gestures at her liveliness, the best part.

[Effector Prime]

exactly. cute+crazy. sometimes you think she's too cute to be crazy but when you her her laugh, you are convinced her craziness has done her beauty justice lol it's pretty easy you know? to describe her, you just have to imagine her frolicsome antics lol the words just flow out of you.. she and her li'l bro "Mr. Shark" are one of the last remaining beacons for fun and a good laugh, of my family life :D cheers dude!

[Namrata]

you have a great time, I envy you. :D

[Effector Prime]

Heyyy.. you're family too, little 'un :) Our doors are wide open for you always!

[Namrata]

pleasure. :D

[Great Aunt Astri]

How lucky you are to have such an interesting cousin. Did she like this poem (very dramatic!)

[Effector Prime]

lol no I don't think she has.. I hope she hasn't.. lol because I can then make a present out of this on her birthday come june? :D she's the third out of 4 incredibly interesting funny, funny kids lol
1. Shulakshitha
2. Shubrish
3. Suremitha
and a "not so little now" brat 4. Suwakeesh.. aka Mr. Shark

I used to be the first 2's tutor years ago.. as such, lol the first one hates me to bits (and is not afraid to say that BAHA!) well, used to..
2. is a cool dude now, 2nd year uni
4. loves me to bits :) I adore Mr. Shark

Suremitha and I have a long history of misunderstandings.. well I think she has a lot of potential but he disappoints now and then.. like when I sit and give her an hour long lecture on veganism and.. she ain't dumb you know.. just ignorant :)

the names..! lol we're Indian.. she wants to be an astrobiologist.. actually I want her to :D she's really the smartest kid I've ever known.. :)

thanks Astri for the lovely review! you rock compadre!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Gee thanks for your kind comment and interesting details of your cousins. Yung Suremitha sounds quite a handful. It is good to have family.

[Effector Prime]

indeed it is :) family can (sure) be a b***h but cousins (the younger ones lol) are the life of the party

[Effector Prime]

not the kinda croak like a pig's grunt (I know girls who do that and wouldn't wana write a song about that.. it's just too.. unbecoming?) but the heavy staggered breath kind.. like when you laugh with/through the throat.. it just sounds so cute+funny.. can't help bursting into laughter when she does that..