Letting Go

Letting Go

A Poem by Brittney

  • Letting go

  • Why?

  • I don't think i could

  • Fighting a lot with each other

  • Always together

  • Never really apart

  • Would he be better without me?

  • What if i do let go?

  • And its turns out to be a mistake

  • How would i feel without him?

  • Good?

  • Bad?

  • Trouble?

  • Wonderful?

  • Should I let go?

  • Or

  • Should i keep him and hold on tight to him forever?

© 2008 Brittney


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i like how you wrote it.
kind of like a to do list.
This is a great piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago


okay...im seriously crying now....i love you baby and you need to learn to take your chances....and keep out the bullets...hehehe silly imoto-chan

Posted 16 Years Ago


Decisions decisions..I think the band ,The Clash ,said it well......"Do i stay or do i go now". I liked the "to do list" feel of this ,that was accentuated by the bullets. Only you can answer these questions.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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