Fighting

• Always fighting

• I'm tired of fighting

• I care so much about him

• I don't wanna lose him because of us fighting

• I trying to hold on tight to him

• I don't wanna let him go

• Always fighting about little stupid things

• I hate it so much

 

Reviews

[Dashiell]

I like it. It's simple and to the point, and you don't choke the poem with too many metaphors (Like me, ha ha.) Keep up the great work.

[Lindsey:)]

i like this kind of style.
This was Awesome and very well expressed.
Good Job!

[Ashlee]

aww...baby...I love you lots and I do love this....it makes me wanna cry