So Confused

So Confused

A Poem by Brittney

  • So Confused
  • About love
  • About everything
  • So what do i do?
  • Run away from here
  • Or just stay
  • So confused
  • My heart says one thing
  • My mind says another
  • So where do i go from here?
  • I need help, please help
  • Somebody, anybody
  • Help
  • I'm so confused

© 2008 Brittney


Author's Note

Brittney
I had written this about 3 years ago after my mom's head injury. I did not know what to do.

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Nice setting on the fonts like this, it shows a lot of confusion and such. We all have the similar problems; Our minds say things, but our hearts tell otherwise. You've said it just about right...

So, it's all great tho and hope all is well sooner...


Posted 16 Years Ago


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Pj
I liked this...the set out was great- the lack of structure heightened the intensity of the flow of consciousness!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm also confused... Just put line breaks on the poem...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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