Cut with a knife

Cut with a knife

A Poem by Rachel m.
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Just think it over a few times you will get it.

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Cut with a knife

A Family of four cut into pieces
by traveling to their vacation house
three members fast asleep
one mind races a million miles

the snow has fallen in the valley
no soul shall hear the roar of the engine
while thoughts pending in the mind
a bridge with ice a mile away never holds

slowly creeping ever near
only to be heard by dear
the scraping of tires
the starting of fires

over and down
ever so far
the huge car
cut into pieces
a family cut to pieces by three witches with a sharpend knife

© 2015 Rachel m.


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I like how the poem makes you think about what is happening, and that it isn't actually a knife that is cutting people but using it as more of a metaphor

Posted 9 Years Ago


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