FeAR.

At. Long. Last.

What's in store for me?
The uncertainty is hurting.
I'm flirting with giving up
And calling it quits.

My life's to s**t,
Plus I'm losing my wits.
The bits of my mind,
I can no longer find,

It's out there stranded.
Whatever is next for me,
Has to be a reality check for me.
In due time we will all see...

Author's Note

"Really what is it to do, when the whole world constantly hating on you..." - Jeffrey Williams

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

I think a number of us can empathize with this one, Jack. Life is full of uncertainty, and I like to be optimistic but it even gets me down sometimes. Even when I want to give up, though, I don't accept that alternative. You've penned the emotions so well as usual.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for reviewing me as always i appreciate your words everytime.

[Stephanie M]

This is a well written poem that I can definitely relate to. I often feel fearful about the uncertainties that I face in my life. However, this poem seems incomplete. Perhaps, you should try adding a couple more lines.

[Kkay]

Full of hopelessness. We want to see if life wd lead to success. Is it worth our pain? Your emotions tell it like you feel it.

[Allie]

Some of the different verses are a little jumbled up, and scattered. But I really like the topic and descriptive words!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I could relate to these words...great job...

[Kasey Miriam]

I really like how this poem flows. It's a very relatable poem. My only little suggestion is to edit the last stanza so that you don't repeat "for me". Fantastic job overall.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you I'll try to find some replacement lines for it and see what works. Thanks for the review

[Ruth]

Sometimes the world is a damn heavy place to breathe in but what's the alternative, giving up and re-learning next time around, gotta hang in there and bite the bullet at times, I totally empathise...poignant piece...