Book Of Soul

I love the way our lips intertwine

Your beauty to me is so divine

Thoughts of you are in my mind

Meeting you was my silver line

Never a day where I can leave you behind

I will chase your love until you're all mine

I adore it when our hearts and thoughts align

I love you where's there no space and time

Mount Everest a million times for you I'll climb

Stealing your heart and soul was the perfect crime

I'm glad to wash your soul of all the grime

I am happy to have you in your beauty prime

Which to me is everyday of your lifetime

© 2014 Jack Kennedy

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Stephanie M

This is a nicely written poem. This is a nicely written poem. Rating /100

jeannemarie coulter

fine penning...well structured with clear images...blessed be to thee... fine penning...well structured with clear images...blessed be to thee... Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Why thank you for the blessings and the review and words. Take Care

maria ( rose)

WoW ! This outta get a girls heart pumping. I adore this poem, filled with passion and love. I like the way it rhymes it flows so well,, Awesome Job !!! WoW ! This outta get a girls heart pumping. I adore this poem, filled with passion and love. I like the way it rhymes it flows so well,, Awesome Job !!! Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Thank you for liking it as much as you did.

Chloe Grant

Caught me right in at the first line, simple and sweet. The rhyming emphasizes the poem, I love it. Awesome job! Caught me right in at the first line, simple and sweet. The rhyming emphasizes the poem, I love it. Awesome job! Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Thank you very much for the review! Glad you stopped by

Ana B.

I like it when a guy has it bad for a girl :) Enjoyed stopping by! I like it when a guy has it bad for a girl :) Enjoyed stopping by! Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Thank you for stopping by! Always glad to hear from you

Luna Zerimar

I usually don't like poems where all the lines rhyme at the end. But this, I have to admit...was exceedingly too hard not to stop reading. Snaps for you dear. Has got the good vibes flowing in. x I usually don't like poems where all the lines rhyme at the end. But this, I have to admit...was exceedingly too hard not to stop reading. Snaps for you dear. Has got the good vibes flowing in. x Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Thank you the snaps and the review! I appreciate it

Brittany Zedalis

╰☆╮I haven't read a rhyming poem like this in quite some time. This is very sweet.╰☆╮ ╰☆╮I haven't read a rhyming poem like this in quite some time. This is very sweet.╰☆╮ Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Thank you i put a lot of thought into it

Briana O'Connor

Very interesting how every single line rhymed here. Nice bit of talent in that. Such a sweet message of love in this. well penned. Very interesting how every single line rhymed here. Nice bit of talent in that. Such a sweet message of love in this. well penned. Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 9 Years Ago Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Kasey Miriam

Very well done lines here. Great work! A very sweet poem. I'm not sure about the last line though, I like the first few words of it, but in the end I got lost in the wording. Other than that line wonderful poem! Very well done lines here. Great work! A very sweet poem. I'm not sure about the last line though, I like the first few words of it, but in the end I got lost in the wording. Other than that line wonderful poem! Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 10 Years Ago Thank you for the reviews! I will fix the last line right now. Kasey Miriam 9 Years Ago After coming back to re-read this I would scratch the last line. it killes the power in the line before it

NoelHC

Nicely done, it sounds like this guy has it deep for his love here. I am unsure about the use of pastime for the last word, it does not seem to match with the definition of "pastime". Did you mean "past time"? If so, drop "the" that is the second last word. Nicely done, it sounds like this guy has it deep for his love here. I am unsure about the use of pastime for the last word, it does not seem to match with the definition of "pastime". Did you mean "past time"? If so, drop "the" that is the second last word. Rating /100 Jack Kennedy 10 Years Ago Thanks for the help I will surely fix the last line asap!!

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Reviews

[Stephanie M]

This is a nicely written poem.

[jeannemarie coulter]

fine penning...well structured with clear images...blessed be to thee...

[Jack Kennedy]

Why thank you for the blessings and the review and words. Take Care

[maria ( rose)]

WoW ! This outta get a girls heart pumping. I adore this poem, filled with passion and love. I like the way it rhymes it flows so well,, Awesome Job !!!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for liking it as much as you did.

[Chloe Grant]

Caught me right in at the first line, simple and sweet. The rhyming emphasizes the poem, I love it. Awesome job!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much for the review! Glad you stopped by

[Ana B.]

I like it when a guy has it bad for a girl :)
Enjoyed stopping by!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for stopping by! Always glad to hear from you

[Luna Zerimar]

I usually don't like poems where all the lines rhyme at the end.

But this, I have to admit...was exceedingly too hard not to stop reading.

Snaps for you dear. Has got the good vibes flowing in. x

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you the snaps and the review! I appreciate it

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I haven't read a rhyming poem like this in quite some time. This is very sweet.╰☆╮

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you i put a lot of thought into it

[Briana O'Connor]

Very interesting how every single line rhymed here. Nice bit of talent in that. Such a sweet message of love in this. well penned.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

[Kasey Miriam]

Very well done lines here. Great work! A very sweet poem. I'm not sure about the last line though, I like the first few words of it, but in the end I got lost in the wording. Other than that line wonderful poem!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the reviews! I will fix the last line right now.

[Kasey Miriam]

After coming back to re-read this I would scratch the last line. it killes the power in the line before it

[NoelHC]

Nicely done, it sounds like this guy has it deep for his love here.
I am unsure about the use of pastime for the last word, it does not seem to match with the definition of "pastime". Did you mean "past time"? If so, drop "the" that is the second last word.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the help I will surely fix the last line asap!!