Predator Vs. Prey

Written in the same style as 'Together At Last'

Prey 

Running 

Tripping 

Falling

Crawling

Staggering

Predator

Racing

Chasing 

Embracing

Tasting

Preying

Result

The Predator wins

The prey's afterlife begins

And the cycle starts all over again

                 

                                                               Bonus Poem:

                                                          "Florette Style Poem"

                                                   Rain falls; the thunder brews

                                                    The storm we must pursue

Author's Note

Okay I for one thinks the bonus is a hidden gem and outshines the main attraction but that's my opinion! The main attraction was written a while ago but I don't too much care for it but you might! Also the bonus was originally on 'Diverse' but it got cut from the final product! There are five or seven others that were cut but will be included as bonuses in future works!

Well hope you all enjoy!! Take Care

Reviews

[IceWinifredd]

Very, very true. In fact, when I finished this poem, I made me think of humans hunting each other other then animals. Weird, huh? This is a very well-written poem. It's short, but I LOVE how it give my heart a little surge of adrenaline. Great work my friend!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you saw it as humans as it was to be that way :) thanks for stopping by!

[Michael Phillips]

Great job on the minimalism! You do that very well and this is another example! Thanks for sharing

[Jennie Baron]

I do like this one, Jack. Very well crafted, really.

[Jack Kennedy]

Why thank you for stopping by and reviewing! Glad to hear from you as always!

[Stephanie M]

that's essentially the circle of life. Nicely written.

[Jack Kennedy]

I thank you for coming by and reviewing!

[Saddam]

Predator
Racing
Chasing
Embracing
Tasting
Preying

[Jack Kennedy]

I take it you liked it?
Thanks for the review :)

[Saddam]

Absolutely dear friend

[Jack Kennedy]

Im very glad to hear that! Thank you dearly

[Saddam]

You are most welcome dear....

[Ency Bearis]

I like the brevity of the poem, great write.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! I'm glad you stopped by for this one as well! Hope to hear from you again

[Ency Bearis]

You're welcome.

[Cory Barrett]

unless the prey win... and they the predator's afterlife begins.

[Jack Kennedy]

That could happen! Wolf in sheep's clothing? Who knows?
Thanks for stopping by!

[Ranger Kessel]

i like how it says so much with few words. very nice work.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Bravo my friend, I really love both poems in this piece.

Kaze~

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for reviewing!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[michele vera]

I Like The Poem. It's Very Witty and quirky at the same time. The bonus Was Very Well-Put to Together As Well! Nice work, Great Read.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for stopping by and reviewing!

[michele vera]

My Pleasure! I'm about to read "Together At Last." I will be sending you a review on it shortly.

[Jack Kennedy]

Awesome! I'll see you then!

[Kasey Miriam]

Bravo! I like the main poem, But the bonus is fantastic! Great job here!

[Jack Kennedy]

Wow! Thanks for your review! I gladly appreciate it!