Predator Vs. Prey

Written in the same style as 'Together At Last'

Prey 

Running 

Tripping 

Falling

Crawling

Staggering

Predator

Racing

Chasing 

Embracing

Tasting

Preying

Result

The Predator wins

The prey's afterlife begins

And the cycle starts all over again

                 

                                                               Bonus Poem:

                                                          "Florette Style Poem"

                                                   Rain falls; the thunder brews

                                                    The storm we must pursue

Author's Note

Okay I for one thinks the bonus is a hidden gem and outshines the main attraction but that's my opinion! The main attraction was written a while ago but I don't too much care for it but you might! Also the bonus was originally on 'Diverse' but it got cut from the final product! There are five or seven others that were cut but will be included as bonuses in future works!

Well hope you all enjoy!! Take Care

Reviews

[IceWinifredd]

Very, very true. In fact, when I finished this poem, I made me think of humans hunting each other other then animals. Weird, huh? This is a very well-written poem. It's short, but I LOVE how it give my heart a little surge of adrenaline. Great work my friend!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you saw it as humans as it was to be that way :) thanks for stopping by!

[Honey-Bee]

Interesting poem here! Maybe the afterlife for the prey will be much better now. I love the way the poem descend down. Lovely write!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you!

[Luna Zerimar]

"..And the cycle starts all over again."

Jack! This was amazing!

This one is going to be in my head for a while!

Well said my friend, well said.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it as much as you did!

[Luna Zerimar]

You're welcome!

[lissalovesyou]

Blunt, short, and powerful. Very enjoyable to read.
The first two stanzas were especially good.
lissalovesyou:)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the review good friend!

[Madalyn Beck]

Short yet powerfully blunt. I really enjoyed it. I could feel myself as the prey in the first verse, the predator in the second, and a shift in the third. Great job! :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you so much for the words!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

You told the cycle in just a few words...excellent writing.....

[NoelHC]

Short and too the point, and the choice of words does match the predator and the prey very well. One word jarred me a little, "Result" in the last stanza, I almost think it could be dropped, and this poem would be even better.
The little short bonus is a nice touch.

[MsJewel]

I admire the way you say so much in so few words. Poetry doesn't have to be long to have meaning. Great writing here my friend. I enjoyed both poems.

:) Julie

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the poems and that you stopped by!

[stars are far]

That was done well :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you :)

[stars are far]

That was done well :)