Over My Dead Body

This is a letter to HER which is a entendre!

How am I feeling, it doesn't matter

Cause you know I'm okay

Still I ask "why do you worry"

When you know I'm the same

Even though you don't love me

They're trying to take you,

Take you away from me

Only Over My Dead Body...

...

Nothing will ever stop us 

Together it is just me and you

You don't and won't ever love me,

But I will forever and ever love you

I will spend eternity chasing you

Chasing the thought of us

We've met like a head-on collision

Not being able to separate since 

I've fallen a bit and you've noticed

Now they want to take you away

Take you far away from me

Only Over My Dead Body...

Author's Note

The Real HER is fame or an actual girl! Whichever way you interpret it!

The first verse was written by Chantal Kreviazuk

Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

While I have often attributed my muse to others, It is ultimately inside of me and despite that fact I see my muse as of the fairer sex. I refuse to be separated from this passenger and will fight tooth and nail to keep it, so this piece speaks to that tenacity in me.

Kudos and keep it up.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much for the wise words as always! I will certainly keep up the work

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem.
"Nothing will ever stop us
Together it is just me and you
You don't and won't ever love me,
But I will forever and ever love you"
The above lines I do understand. When love overtakes us. We won't give up. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing poem, I loved reading this piece. :-)

Kaze~

[Susie]

Nawe this really leaves me with a morbid feeling... which means you have done your job well.
These lines "made" the poem. They really brought it home for me...

You don't and won't ever love me,

But I will forever and ever love you

I will spend eternity chasing you

Chasing the thought of us

Thanks again

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you a ton! Its good that you especially liked the second verse! I love that second verse as well :)

[Ana B.]

Hmmm I like how you put in your love and willingness to fight for it and chase after it.....loved your work, as always - brilliant :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the reviews and support :)

[Luna Zerimar]

I can relate well. Too well.

[just Penny]

It reads like a kind of obsession, with deep determination to keep what has been attained. It has a darkness to it that can feel quite intense too. Nice work, Jack. Penny

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks my friend! I'm glad you liked it and Take Care :)

[Laura Harrison]

This is brilliant! You're a really good writer :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you and you definitely are too!

[Stephanie M]

This is a great poem. I especially like the part where you describe how you met.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the read and I'm glad you liked it!

[maria ( rose)]

I will spend eternity chasing you
Chasing the thought of us

love it, love it, Jack..!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much :)! I'm happy you're happy!

[Jennie Baron]

Yes, clever double entendre. If you interpret "her" as being Fame, she can be a cruel, cold mistress as well, eh? I like this one a lot, Jack.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank yo! I'm very glad you liked it!