Over My Dead Body

This is a letter to HER which is a entendre!

How am I feeling, it doesn't matter

Cause you know I'm okay

Still I ask "why do you worry"

When you know I'm the same

Even though you don't love me

They're trying to take you,

Take you away from me

Only Over My Dead Body...

...

Nothing will ever stop us 

Together it is just me and you

You don't and won't ever love me,

But I will forever and ever love you

I will spend eternity chasing you

Chasing the thought of us

We've met like a head-on collision

Not being able to separate since 

I've fallen a bit and you've noticed

Now they want to take you away

Take you far away from me

Only Over My Dead Body...

Author's Note

The Real HER is fame or an actual girl! Whichever way you interpret it!

The first verse was written by Chantal Kreviazuk

Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

While I have often attributed my muse to others, It is ultimately inside of me and despite that fact I see my muse as of the fairer sex. I refuse to be separated from this passenger and will fight tooth and nail to keep it, so this piece speaks to that tenacity in me.

Kudos and keep it up.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much for the wise words as always! I will certainly keep up the work

[stars are far]

That had the voice of determination...i loved it, and well done :)

[Ruth]

Gripping! Potent imagery and power within, love can be a fierce thing when needed x

[lissalovesyou]

How true.
"The only way
They can take you away
Is Over My Dead Body"
lissalovesyou:)

[Kasey Miriam]

Another great poem were you threw all you've got into the words! Keep this up and you'll go far. You've grown in your writing quite a bit already

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much! I really appreciate the kind words :) also thanks for the review!

[Kasey Miriam]

You're welcome! When ever you have something new send a RR please

[Brittany Zedalis]

Some awesome determination within this. Great work.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you, I appreciate the reviews very much!

[Madalyn Beck]

Beautiful write. I really enjoyed where you took this! (:

[Jack Kennedy]

I'm very glad you liked it and Thank you for your time and review! :)

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

Free style is the hardest to review simply because its raw and deep. I liked this poem. Its hard for me to review poems since they are so emotionally deep. But I did enjoy reading this. Thats all I can say.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the review as always I'm glad you reviewed it and liked it!

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

You are very welcome :)

[Madison O'Dwyer]

"We've met like a head-on collision
Not being able to separate since." - This was my favourite line, I thought it very striking and raw and honest and yet eloquent as well.

Beautiful poem overall, had me intrigued from start to finish. Thanks for sharing!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much indeed! :) I hope to hear more reviews from you soon and thanks again for this one! It means a lot!!!

[Saddam]

Truely marvelous..... Great poem. I like that one.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[NoelHC]

I chose to interpret as an actual girl, and this makes me think of the fine line between unrequited love and crazy stalker obsession.
Well written, and I can see how this would work for fame as well, but I am going with the girl angle.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the reviews! I greatly appreciate them and that you pocked which angle you preferred! That was cool