Over My Dead Body

This is a letter to HER which is a entendre!

How am I feeling, it doesn't matter

Cause you know I'm okay

Still I ask "why do you worry"

When you know I'm the same

Even though you don't love me

They're trying to take you,

Take you away from me

Only Over My Dead Body...

...

Nothing will ever stop us 

Together it is just me and you

You don't and won't ever love me,

But I will forever and ever love you

I will spend eternity chasing you

Chasing the thought of us

We've met like a head-on collision

Not being able to separate since 

I've fallen a bit and you've noticed

Now they want to take you away

Take you far away from me

Only Over My Dead Body...

Author's Note

The Real HER is fame or an actual girl! Whichever way you interpret it!

The first verse was written by Chantal Kreviazuk

Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

While I have often attributed my muse to others, It is ultimately inside of me and despite that fact I see my muse as of the fairer sex. I refuse to be separated from this passenger and will fight tooth and nail to keep it, so this piece speaks to that tenacity in me.

Kudos and keep it up.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much for the wise words as always! I will certainly keep up the work

You can't help who you love and that person may not be with you but they can not take the love you feel for them away. nice write

[IceWinifredd]

Nice poem, nice writing style, powerful lines, and an enjoyable write. What could I possibly complain about? It's was a great piece of art. Nice work.

[Jack Kennedy]

I thank you very much for the words! Always Greta to get reviews good or bad as long as they're reasonable

[unsavable_soul]

Interesting piece,
I loved the head on collision and be stuck together afterward. it was a nice lay out.
Chris

[Tristyn]

Some very powerful lines there...

"How am I feeling, it doesn't matter
Cause you know I'm okay
Still I ask "Why do you worry?"
When you know I'm the same"

"I will spend eternity chasing you
Chasing the thought of us
We've met like a head-on collision"

Just a point - "Even thought you don't love me" - should be though, not thought. Just kinda interrupted the flow of the poem for me.

[Jack Kennedy]

Ahhh you are the only person who caught that! Thank you for pointing it out and reviewing!

[Tristyn]

That's ok - things like that are hard to spot because usually our brains will compensate for us. I'm just super-obsessive about things that interrupt flow, so I can't help but notice. Keep up the good work. :)

[Jack Kennedy]

I surely will and thanks for stopping by :)

[Ranger Kessel]

nice metaphor, nice poem. thanks for sharing

[MsJewel]

Love your use of metaphor in this well written poem. Quite powerful!

:)Julie

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you! Glad you liked it and took time to review on top of that! Awesome to hear from you

[Yaren]

This poem is so great, well done!
Yaren

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much for the review and I hope to hear from you again

[Yaren]

Youre welcome, and you will for sure : )

[Nina C Palmer]

My favorite line "I've fallen a bit and you've noticed"