Diverse

Compilation Of Different Poetry styles I wrote in with various different subjects.

"Acrostic Poem"

Breath of love's air you are

All I will ever want is you 

Into my heart you belong 

Loving you with my heart

Eternity with you I will spend

You and me will be how it all ends

"Rondelet Poem"

Such loneliness

Rears its head around my way,

Such loneliness

Grabs me by my throat;

It's grip tightens by the second

A resistance I would of reckoned

But It consumes me whole

Such loneliness

"Septolet Style Poem"

Maniac

Stalking women

In the distance,

Waiting

Woman

Passing by

Non noticing

Of Him

"Another Septolet Poem"

Heart

Beats for you

And You only 

Soul

Is only yours

And yours only 

"Shape Style Poetry"

      Sorry for what I have done to you.

   O..Only you can forgive me.

  R... Real love could surpass this.

 R..     Rest your heart on mine again.

Y....     You won't ever have to worry.

"Tetractys Style Poem"

Tired 

Of you

All the lies 

The other men

I'm done with you for good this time

"Haiku Style Poem".                                      

Crazy beautiful 

You are to me and the world 

Soul so rich and pure

"Another Haiku Poem"

You're Polarizing

You're Always confusing me

That's why I love you

Author's Note

I hope how these are structured does not confuse you!!! If it does I'm SORRY!!!

Reviews

[BlackRose]

The last two are Senryu style. These are more so about human nature and society. Haiku style are more about seasons or nature, dealing with either of these in anyway. Examples,

1. The leaves of Autumn
lovely gold and brown colors
painting the landscape

2. My piece is called, What Becomes Of A Weathered Haiku. You can read it if you want.

I think it''s alot easier to write a senryu than hiaku, it's more freer in that you can write about anything as long as it's the 5 7 5 syllable rule each line. I have quite a few of the senryu pieces if you want to read those too. You'll know by it having the name in the title fully or some part of the word there or joined with another word.

In the first poem, acrostic, the line, Into my heart you belong. You could say since heart is already there below it, use 'world' instead to change it up a bit without using the same word twice. In certain cases depending on what it's about, what you're conveying or your writing can you or is ok use a word like that more than once. As long as you try to captivate the reader. But thought here you could do without it repeating.

The forth, Shape Style Poetry it is not and is more of an Acrostic poem (I get what you were trying to do though and is a another great piece). Would be instead of the repeating letters as this,

Sorry for what I have done to you.
Only you can forgive me.
Real love could surpass this.
Rest your heart on mine again.
You won't ever have to worry.

Shape style poetry or Shape poems starts with the O by itself, then describes what your talking about, can rhyme and other such ways and as far as I have seen are not too too long as this example,

(my own thought up quick)

O
Nuts are for eating
squirrels eat them all the time
how scrumptious to the taste
I can never get enough of them
they are my favorite to eat

Roundelet is spelled as Rondelet. It's french and you did a great job with it, written the right way.

And lastly the septolet, I would change this, And yours only, to something else. It needs that break and this doesn't being the exact as the top. Otherwise both fab pieces.

I hope this helps you in the future. Sorry I wrote so long here. Otherwise these are all WONDERFUL pieces. :o)

And don't worry about confusion and all. That's the best part about writing is you can be free in your writes as long as someone can at least understand it mostly or all, be relative, relate to it and so forth. Or you follow certain guidelines as the ones above or others not stated written in your own way.

[Britt Nicole]

I liked it! Poems are my weakness!

But what Dana said was right. The first one was lovely, smooth and full of emotion. The rest were kind of hard to read, I couldn't hear any emotion in the words. But amazing!!

[TL Boehm]

wonderful little collection of brain snippets. I think today the Roundelet wins but they are all well written and I enjoyed them.

[A. Amos]

You're insanely talented...in a very good way and will be back to read more

[abluehorseandflowers]

I must concur with h d e rushin.
I appreciate your enthusiasm, openness to suggestion and most of all, your gifts. If I may suggest, you aren't in a race Jack. A plant's growth may be accelerated with the use of fertilizer, but too much will kill it. Some flourish in bright sunlight, some prefer the shade.
My favorite form to write is the Villanelle, but it doesn't work for every sentiment I'm writing to express. When it doesn't, however well developed the theme may be, it comes off sounding clunky, contrived. (see Trust is Vulnerable.)
So, take your time. Explore yourself and what you want to express, you will come across the "how" as you grow. And what ever else may be, Keep Writing... Scott

[h d e rushin]

dont worry about confusion my friend. Keep working on your structure, both your intellectual and artistic efflorescence and just watch what happens. I loved the first stanza that was filled with passion, but
the rest read like a manuscrirpt. Be careful of that. But continue to push the boundaries of
convention. suggest revolution.....always.

nicely done.
dana

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you find your way to my other works!!! Thanks again