Together At Last

Another Romantic one (done with the horror work... For now)

Me

Wanting

Lusting

Loving

Longing 

You 

Willing

Thinking 

Waiting

Debating

Us

Together

Forever

At last 

Confessing eternal love

Author's Note

Write this one a while ago and its one of my Drake type poems

Reviews

[michele vera]

I Really Loved This! Absolutely Well Placed-Wording and The Theme Of Eternal Love is One Of My Favorite Themes. You Totally Captured The emotion Very Accurately. It somehow made me think of a Rock song, from the Band Call Arctic Monkeys the song is called "Do I Wanna Know." It has the same Push and Pull of two Lovers. That constant Pull of True Love. Excellent Poem!

[Jack Kennedy]

I am absolutely flattered by your comments! They mean a great deal to me and I'm very astounded to know you like the poem as much as you did! Thanks a ton and thanks for reviewing!

[michele vera]

Your Very Welcome! I Truly enjoyed Reading Your Poetry! Very Very Well Done!

[Blood Ink Diary]

Ah, yes, the oscillation of the two sides of the equation in a union ! Well versed, dear Jack. Keep penning ! Cheers

[Eli Jarman]

Glad you had this one perfected

[Jack Kennedy]

i told you I made this style and mastered it with just two poems!!!

[Kasey Miriam]

Fantastic that one little change was perfect.

[Jack Kennedy]

I know right.. She surprised me with that idea...

[ScoobyDooby]

wow, this is good. in stanza 2 line 5 i would leave it just "Debating" considering this is a love poem its easy to take that she would be debating the love. good job c:

[Jack Kennedy]

YES THAT'S PERFECT THANK YOU!!!