Together At Last

Another Romantic one (done with the horror work... For now)

Me

Wanting

Lusting

Loving

Longing 

You 

Willing

Thinking 

Waiting

Debating

Us

Together

Forever

At last 

Confessing eternal love

Author's Note

Write this one a while ago and its one of my Drake type poems

Reviews

[michele vera]

I Really Loved This! Absolutely Well Placed-Wording and The Theme Of Eternal Love is One Of My Favorite Themes. You Totally Captured The emotion Very Accurately. It somehow made me think of a Rock song, from the Band Call Arctic Monkeys the song is called "Do I Wanna Know." It has the same Push and Pull of two Lovers. That constant Pull of True Love. Excellent Poem!

[Jack Kennedy]

I am absolutely flattered by your comments! They mean a great deal to me and I'm very astounded to know you like the poem as much as you did! Thanks a ton and thanks for reviewing!

[michele vera]

Your Very Welcome! I Truly enjoyed Reading Your Poetry! Very Very Well Done!

[Girl With A Pen]

A simple poem with a powerful meaning! Love it

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for your review! I gladly appreciate them

[michele vera]

I Love this Poem also. Very well-written and full of loving emotion. Grat Poem!I Like the way the whole Poem came together. Love is one of the most Powerful emotions, and you captured it so Nicely!

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked the poem as much as you did! That makes me very happy and motivated

[michele vera]

You are very Welcome. It was a Wonderful Poem!

[Luna Zerimar]

Simple, yet it's saying a whole lot.

Well done. (:

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you very much!

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

The last line through it off for me but this was a very simple, sweet, poem and I really enjoyed it

[Megan Simpson]

Its simplicity makes it beautiful. Well done :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank You! I hope to hear from you again :)

[Megan Simpson]

Haha you definitely will, I'm kinda reading a bunch of your poems right now... I really like them!!

[Jack Kennedy]

I'm glad you are liking them! Thanks so much

[Awakened Rose]

love this piece :) the stanza breaks are perfect. Thanks for sharing!

[Jack Kennedy]

You are welcome and thanks for the review!

[lissalovesyou]

This is great! Kinda Drake-ish.
It has wonderful flow and the whole poem is wonderfully expressed through the short words.
lissalovesyou:)

[Jack Kennedy]

Nice to know you listen to drake and thanks for the review! :)

[lissalovesyou]

Your welcome.
lissalovesyou:)

[Jennie Baron]

This has the feel of a rap for sure...love the rhythm of it and the emotion and I don't think I'd change anything. Says a lot in a few words.

[David Moreland]

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture - according to (shadowpoetry.com, http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/septolet.html - Last visited 4/9/2014).

For sure, this piece is romantic. But is it what it is?

[Jack Kennedy]

Yeah I got the memo about the septolet poem correction and I will change that. Thanks for the review and I hope you find your way to my other works

[David Moreland]

I will. I'm enjoying it, Jack.