Ch. 14

Edward was still weak. He only had 2 mountain lions. "Lauren... forget about it. We need... we need to save them..."           

 

I sighed. He was right. Even if he could barely speak. So I grabbed hold of  hime and ran but then stopped short. "Um.... I don't think I know where they are..."

 

I tried to see if I could catch anyone's scent. I managed to get Carlisle's scent, which is good. I ran in the direction. It turns out that the scent was coming from the Opera House. "This is where his plan was supposed to be."

 

Edward seemed confused. "What?"

 

"He was planning something here. According to 'Edward'. I guess we better go in.."

 

I trailed off and ran in. The opera house was gorgeus with many paintings on the walls that looked achient. I studied the area around me. I can smell Carlisle, Alice and Bella not to far from here. But then relised something. "Wasn't there supposed to be a play here?"

 

All of a sudden, it became dark and then I heard Naum's voice calling. "Come and het us!" He said it in a mocking tone.

 

I ran with Edward still on my back in the direction of his voice. We were soon in a palace like room where balls could be taken place in from a fairytale. I saw Carlisle. Alice, and Bella helpless on the floor as Naum lunged forward to kill them.

 

I screamed as loud as I could. "STOP!"

 

Naum chuckled with delight as he stopped. "So you're finally here..." After he said this, the other Edward appered.Carlisle, Alice, and Bella looked back and forth between the two Edwards.

 

I pointed to the emposter. "That's not the real Edward! The real one is right here!" I gestured to him on my back as he clung on still weak.

 

Everyone gasped.

 

The other Edward looked at us. "What do you mean? I'm the real Edward!"

 

"No. I am!" The real Edward let go and he stood there with an evil look. I ready to catch him if he was to fall.

 

"I'm the real Edward Cullen. You are just a clone. If you want to prove you're the real one, then fight me!"

Author's Note

wow i actually got done this chapter! yay!

Reviews

[silver threaded queen]

you ruined twilight.
It sucked in the first place you didn't need to do any more damage to the poor thing. Spelling is god awful you spelled damn it wrong. Damn it!! I mean it's not like you can't get spell check. What makes you think you can write twilight from a different perspective. It is one of a kind and should not be messed with.