Preface

preface told in author point of view!!!!

      It was pouring hard in Chicago. As the rain raced down like bullets, Dr. Frank Wallace rode down the muddy road on his horse. He must hurry to his destination. A baby is about to be born and he must deliver it.

      The rain came down so hard that Dr. Wallace was blind. It's fortunate that the horse was able to see through this rapid storm. It was like a waterfall puring down from the night sky.

       Finally, Dr. Wallace was able to see the light coming from the farm. It glowed in the distance. The horse skidded to a stop in front of the stable. Next to the stable was a man with a very faint black coat. His mustashe dropped down soaking wet as the rain soaked him. The horse went inside the stable as the man led Dr. Wallace inside.

      "We're sorry for making you come out here doctor. My brother refused to let Elizabeth out of the house in this storm," the man explained.

       Dr. Wallace smiled. "That's fine with me. I just came here to do my job."

       The man said, "Please call me George."

        Once they were in the room, Dr. Wallace hurried to his patient. There lays Elizabeth Masen about to have her baby. Her husband, Edward was holding her hand. Elizabeth was full of sweat and beads of water covered her pale face. She breathed heavy in and out. Dr. Wallace went right to work.

          It was finally over. The baby was out with a cry of joy. Elizabeth sighed in relief. "Let me have him."

          Dr. Wallace handed her the baby boy. She cradled him in her slender arms. He was beautiful. He had specks of bronze hair and emerald green eyes. He looked up at her with a serious look.

          "What shall we call our son?" asked Edward.

           Elizabeth laughed. "I was thinking... Edward Anthony Masen Jr."

           He nodded. "Perfect."

           Edward looked up at his mother with wonder in his eyes.

Author's Note

hope u like it so far.

Reviews

[winter]

OMG. You have to start writing chapter one soon! I was immediately hooked when I was done reading it. Here I am with my hopes up and ready to read chaper 1 and come to find out...it isn't here yet. Great job. I am sooo excited to read chapter 1!!!

[Kaiko]

....Was there a Chicago when he was born?? Didn't he live in Europe somewhere???

So far good though.

[Pookie]

yeah really short ='[
But sounds just like Edward Always straight faced never really having an emotion on. Lol

[Martina]

Usually babies dont have hair straight away but good and really short :(